Reviews for Major Whitlock At Your Service
Old Brown Show chapter 1 . 10/8/2014
It was really hice, write moré about this!
ballet fairy chapter 1 . 6/21/2014
Awesome and I love the story Japer cares about Bella but he is often overlooked in bonding stories.
magic22 chapter 1 . 2/25/2014
MCR Killjoys chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
i loved it x
ehqueue chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
purple1girl chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
i liked it, i wish they put more bella jaxsper bonding in the books
belle husband lover chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
love the bonding jasper and bella dit
AndAllThatMishigas chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
Dude! I want Jasper to help me study! SO SWEET! He's a good brother. Wish SM had thought to explore that relationship better. So glad you did! :)
Two Last Words chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
Uh...Thomas 'Stonewall' Jackson was a Confederate General the way you have it worded it looks like you think that General Jackson was a Union solider. Over all a cute little story. Good job.
Sunshine72 chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
I loved it! I wish SM had put more of the Bella/Jasper relationship in the books. You get Bella/Alice, Bella/Emmett, and Bella/Rosalie in the books. Well I just really liked the story.