|Reviews for It's Nothing|
| AS chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
Really good story :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
You should continue the story. I liked it very much.
| January chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
| Black-Roses-18 chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
Great story, it really kept me on my toes. i would have loved it though if they could have worked it out before he past. like was he really cheating and would she have acually asked him about it?
| Major-Fire-Blaze chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
Sad, but very nicely written
| LittleMissCaitlin23 chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
Hey nice fic :) hope you'll update soon
| Mickster chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
Oh, I would SO like to think that Edward reached out one more time and Bella took his bait. She does not deserve to be lonely. Carlisle, on the other hand, got his karma! He broke her heart, and his literally broke. Awesomely written story. I hope you decide to write a full length E/B ff at some point. You are very talented. Your lemony one shot was totally awesome, too!
| MoonlitSnowFox chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
So very sad. Lovely fic - thanks for the read.
| willel chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
This is a truly inspiring, eloquent and well written story. I thoroughly look forward to your future fiction.:)
| Suzbythesea chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
That was such a poignant, touching story. You literally had me in tears when Bella received the news of the "widow maker" in the hospital... really didn't see that one coming. Looking forward to you (possibly) extending this story. Really beautifully written. Thankyou. )
| Alby Mangroves chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
I really liked this story in the contest, and I'm glad that you're going to write the multi-chap! I think that's awesome. I liked that you gave us reasonable timeframes for the events to unfold here, I don't think that's an easy thing to do, people are tempted to jump into what they think the readers want rather than doing the story justice.
Well done on your entry and best of luck writing the multi-chapter! I would like very much to read it xAM
| gumibear26 chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
This was a very sad story; I should know better than to read stories labeled "angst" only. It was well written, although I found the third person writing style rather dispassionate. The story did move me almost to tears (my throat got tight). Such an opportunity wasted simply based on the circumstances. I really kind of wanted to see Carlisle get confronted and get a comeuppance, the cheating bastard. Dying was too good for him. And poor Bella, missing out on Edward just because he met his lesbian cousin (love that!) for lunch. I hated to see the story end there.
| FranRichards chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
Love this. Can't wait for the'sequel'! Wouldn't it be awkward if Edwards mum was Esme!
| NatTheHippieChild chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
That was fucking depressing. Well written but so depressing. Damn. Good job tho
| it's simply me n you chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
Very interesting story. Very realistic in how it shows that life kind of gets in our way and things can blow up before we know it.