Reviews for The King of the Sanctuary: Creating a Family
kate chapter 8 . 12/31/2011
Please put up chapter 9 soon and hurry and I feel bad for that cub kaka but I'm glad scar who rose calls taka got revenge and I hope taka and rose will try again for a family of their own
88882568888 chapter 8 . 12/31/2011
I missed chapter seven! D:

Oh well, it's gratifying to se Mzungu dead!
The Tell-Tale Man chapter 8 . 12/31/2011
That story with Scar on it was pretty cool so please keep up this next chapter. Thanks so much.
kate chapter 7 . 12/22/2011
Please put up chapter 8 soon and hurry and those were sweat words of comfort that scar who rose calls taka gave to rose and that was mean of muzungu to injure rose that she lost hers and takas first cub,I think taka should should go to that lion called muzungu and go kill him that's just my opinion
88882568888 chapter 6 . 12/22/2011
Noes! D':

I don't think it was Devil, but I could be wrong.

I just don't think even HE would do something like that...
kate chapter 6 . 12/22/2011
Please put up chapter 7 soon and hurry and poor rose she and scar who rose calls taka deserve a cub of their own and when that lion named devil hears that rose has been injured he will blame scar who rose calls taka and say something like ( you should have taken better care of her)
MR.E chapter 5 . 12/21/2011
when are you going to update your patg stories,some f us are still waiting!
88882568888 chapter 5 . 12/21/2011
Devil, y u no leave them alone?

I hope Rose's cub is gonna be OK... : /
Lord Creator chapter 5 . 12/21/2011
Have no fear, I forgive Scar for"not leaping for joy", he has a bad back you know. I liked the chapter, and I look forward to seeing what Devil is going to do{if he is serious about that whole vengance business}

Raises a glass of Coke}stay thirsty comrade
kate chapter 5 . 12/20/2011
Please put up chapter 6 soon and hurry and I think scar who rose calls taka sounded worried,I know scar who rose calls taka will protect his and roses cubs from getting killed by that lion named devils claws
Lord Creator chapter 4 . 12/20/2011
Nice plot going so far, I am liking it alot. Sounds like Scar{or Rose} may have to kick Devil's tail again though{sweet}. Looking forward to the next update!

Raises a glass of coke}stay thirsty Comrade, and a Merry Christmas or whatever it is you celebrate.
88882568888 chapter 4 . 12/20/2011
Scar's got a surprise on the way! :o

I wonder how he'll react... :3
kate chapter 4 . 12/19/2011
Please put up chapter 5 soon and hurry and im glad rose and scar who rose calls taka are starting a family i wanna say congratulations to rose i know she will be a good mom to her cubs , i hope that the lion named devil dont kill one or roses cubs
88882568888 chapter 3 . 12/18/2011
WOW Devil... Just HAD to go there, didn't you. :(
kate chapter 3 . 12/17/2011
Please put up chapter 4 soon and hurry and i liked what kafil had to say to scar who rose calls taka
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