Reviews for Dare
ilikescreamobutimnotemo chapter 12 . 9/8/2012
finns stupid... And I love this story :D
LadyRhoswen chapter 12 . 9/3/2012
Love this fic, i really do!

I just found it and I read it in a breath, now I con't wait for the next chapter to be released!

I hope to read you soon!
me chapter 8 . 9/2/2012
I was totally googling it.
you get that with comments like that.
well, no comment. or: of course jesse, of course.
me chapter 3 . 9/2/2012
wooh. hot.
how much I love Jesse. I wish I had a Jesse for me.

and this here reminded me of 50 shades of grey.
although this here is better because of jesse and rachel.

GiulietteRose chapter 12 . 8/31/2012
An update from this would be wonderful, too...
Love ya!
mrsstjames chapter 12 . 8/28/2012
update update!
Kasumi Izukawa chapter 12 . 8/26/2012
I love this fic. It's all hot smut and depth and dark jesse is just so so sexy. So yes, Finn is very very annoying and I hope both he and Rachel finally make him realize what they're trying to say. Of course, he'd probably make himself out to be a victim but eh. Anyway, this is really awesome and I hope to read more soon!
Tatiana Ruiz chapter 12 . 8/24/2012
Please continue with this fanfic as soon as possible! You are an amazing writer and congrats for this story! :)
Myloveneverdies chapter 12 . 8/24/2012
I love it, I love it, I love it, I love it! I was actually kinda hoping Finn would rape her so that I could see Jesse's reaction. I am so addicted to your stories! I can't wait for the next chapter! Love ya mama duck!
michemistic chapter 12 . 8/23/2012
I’m so elated you updated so fast! MORE! MOOOOOOORRRRRREEEEE! I beg of thee! If you’re finishing this masterpiece on my birthday, than I plead that you make as much chapters as possible because this needs ALL the chapters!

Ugh, the one time I look forward to seeing Finn and the dope can’t even do that right. If only Rachel knew how much Will uses his authority as power to control these kids. I swear he meddles so much in their lives to make up for his lack of one. He really has no friends that are his own age.

If Finn honestly cared so much, he would have talked with Rachel first and if he tells an adult, he should be there with them and not, “have the grown-ups do it for me.”

Way out of line that he’s assuming about how Rachel interacts in her private life, about her own parents no less. It’s just like when Will stepped out of bounds with Shelby, he has no right to speak for her.

“Jesse wanted her back. He wanted her in a very real, very possessive and permanent way.” If Rachel is questioning if she and Jesse will go the distance, Jesse knows that they’re each others, “one and only.” Like just the thought alone of being separated from Rachel again must be a huge peeve of his. Right on target about not sharing the spotlight or his girl…but he loves to share the spotlight WITH his girl.

For someone that’s an outcast, nabbing the most popular boy at school is like the ultimate high school daydream. Only useful for a short amount of time and for all the wrong reasons. Understandable, but even the show pointed out it’s because of being in love with the idea than the actual person. BUT if only Rachel attended Carmel her freshmen year (or at least transferred) she could have had the big man on campus AND a more than compatible partner that offers more than being some status trophy (as seen with Kurt at Dalton, Blaine is the popular lead singer at a school that respects the arts and respects Kurt).

True, it’s their impatience to be away from each other just to put on a condom than not having any. Glad that Rachel’s experience into safe sex is comfortable and accepting because no medical establishment has the right to judge their clients. That Rachel feels grown-up and responsible makes me feel so proud of her because it is an important moment she should enjoy and remember.

Even though I’m so grateful and overjoyed you kept Rachel’s accurate age, I also enjoy that you did what you wanted and let her drive even though she’s a few months too early to have a license (because it’s so much more convenient that way). As someone that was in the exact same age-grade predicament as Rachel, it sucked hard having to wait longer to drive while everyone had that freedom. Ah the freedom of writing your own world!
Stupid McKinley making Rachel too desperate to break-up with Finn or she’ll be alone in school, we’re still too early in the season where she and Kurt start bonding. Give me my theatrical curly-haired diva babies or give me death! *Grabs baby Gracie from the future and runs off*

About the showering too much issue, does she have a shower cap? They’re really helpful when you want to refresh your body but not get your already clean hair wet again. Or even putting your hair up and have your head avoid the water. Or what about a removable showerhead? They’re just as useful as a bidet, but way cheaper for cleaning just the private parts. Also, removable showerheads come in various settings that can be helpful back massagers which is good for after work outs…and other means of release because Jesse did say no TOUCHING, not indirect use of satisfaction. Sorry about that spiel about shower time.

Ever heard of knocking you moron? In all honesty, like Rachel I’m just dumbstruck. Usually I would be in a complete tyrannical rage, but here I’m just shell-shocked over this disgusting twist. Don’t get me wrong, I’m all kinds of pissed but just more, “in processing mode” really. Maybe your SA fic de-sensitized me enough to the point of being numb because there’s so much worse you can dish out. Even when Jesse went to Rachel, he warned her which is a form of permission. Not this open invitation that was never even given that the oaf just stumbles through. It’s just too gross that 10 seconds still is too much-I counted 10 seconds over and over to make it seem shorter.

I was hoping you would stop it with Finn unfortunately seeing her almost all nude than THAT. If he’s a dead man walking for just SEEING Rachel, than Jesse’s going to torture and kill Finn, then resurrect him so he could do it all over again for touching his love AND without her consent. Since Rachel was the one that was more level-headed and mature with her reprimand and break-up, then I’m strongly rooting that Jesse would be the opposite. He would just snap and release his jealous, possessive, scorching hot rage. RELEASE HIS DARKNESS! Go full out, I know Jesse can be a patient, calculated, sly-cat (as you wrote in Inevitability), but in this case-IT’S PURE UNADULTATERD VENOMOUS FURY AND WRATH! Come on Cris, have Jesse come down like the hand of an angry, powerful, ravenous god of war! A ferocious hellhound beast coming in to attack and mutilate anyone that would DARE touch his mate. I’m looking forward to this and Finn’s suffering *tents fingers and does a warped smirk*

Until next time, creator.
michemistic chapter 11 . 8/22/2012
Well, well, well, look what we’ve got here! I was legitimately afraid that you abandoned the St. Berry bubble for Twilight! I was even getting jealous! Petty fangirl is petty.


Have you seen the glorious deleted St. Berry duet scene released on Youtube?! Lea Michele spoke up for us and asked for it to be given to the masses!

I’m relieved that Rachel and Jesse are going out in public together without being spotted as of yet.

Oh God Cris, this scene! Artichoke hearts? More like my heart is choking with all my emotions *dodges more flying produce*

Taking the initiative for intimate time is expected of the sex-slave every now and then, continue on Rachel.

“You're mine, I'm the first to ever get your body. I'll be the last to get your heart.," he groaned between licks and nibbles at her skin. "I god, Rach."”-Jesse’s possessiveness and utter love for Rachel is resembling of my questionable obsession with this story *clutches it to my chest overprotectively*

Your literary pornfilmed pornography. It can’t even compare.

The absolute possessive and animalistic claim of her, Rachel has reduced (and yet ascended) her soulmate into his most basic, instinctual level of our species. In this moment he’s no different to a beast in heat *practically sprayed the choir room* I would honestly bet he would inflict pain on anyone that would DARE interrupt his moment with Rachel. I really hope we also get more of Jesse’s POV-especially when they’re making love, both rough sex and slow sex.

Oh wow, how Rachel is so exhausted from having her orgasms she’s practically at the brink of passing out. That is both really hot, a huge boost to Jesse’s ego (like he needs more), and just a tad bit concerning because as much stamina Rachel has, she’s not immune to blacking out.

Oh thank you for some sweet afterglow, how Rachel can still be a totally adorable and sweet, and a sexually empowered woman that is more than capable of distracting someone with her, “feminine wiles.” Speaking of, “baby” (that term of endearment is up there with, “my own” :3), that’s the reason why the Berry daddies won’t allow any sleepovers *pouts*

When they live together, Jesse would make that no panties rule permanent. I can see him bringing up the argument that if men can lounge around in just their boxers (like in the NYC apartment with Rachel and their baby Gracie!), women might just as well spend time in the privacy of their own abode not wearing much too.

I really hope you’re foreshadowing on Rachel leaving McKinley, I wonder where she’ll transfer to instead. If only this phantom can just tie a noose around the guy that gets in the way and pull it through unlike the source material, but that’s not the kind of dark you’re going for...

Even if the Berry daddies wanted to press charges, there’s befittingly enough a Romeo and Juliet clause, which allows anyone less than three years older than a minor can be excused from statutory rape (unless you went with my headcanon and made Jesse three-and-a-half years older than Rachel, in which he’s already 19). Still, as open-minded they're being, they're still dads. TWO DADS, so twice as much threatening and grilling their baby girl's significant companion.

I don’t know how in the world you manage your time and life, but major props to you lovely!
Guest chapter 12 . 8/22/2012
I can't wait for the next chapter! Update as soon as you can!
eternallystberry chapter 12 . 8/20/2012
Oh, god. I love this fic. I'm excited to see Jesse's reaction... whether he'll become jealous and possessive or if he'll immediately start planning his comeuppance or what. Cliffhangers are the absolute worst, but they certainly build up suspense.
suburbianblues chapter 12 . 8/19/2012
Repulsed when Finn touched her. Uh. Anyways good chapter, I just wish there had been some Jesse. St. Berry action really. I'm curious as to what Jesse is going to do about the whole Finn thing thing. Update soon
RemyGraham chapter 12 . 8/19/2012
This was amazing. I'm glad that she finally managed to talk to him. You write Finn really well.. I can't wait to see what happens next. And I'm not even going to complain about being spoiled with two new chapters so close together causel;jsgos awesome.
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