Reviews for Phoenix
hissmiles chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
God, you totally made me cry my eyes out!

Wonderful, heart breaking writing! And very elegantly sliding in the tragedy at the beginning...

Thank you for giving me such a great story to treasure - once more you didn't disappoint...
grabadietcoke chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
So not surprised to see your name attached to this - not that I guessed earlier! This was my very favorite story in the contest. The stroller image still haunts me!
Erikajo chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
Absolutely heart wrenching and beautiful at the same time. Great writing. :)
pnkats chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
Omg that was so awesome. So glad there was a hea! Good job.
LaPumuckl chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
That was so great!

It had everything good stories need, happyness, sadly moments and of course a good lemon!
IHeartYou xxx chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
This is the BEST oneshot I've ever read!
noddin chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
Loved this story!
asiula chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
As I said in the contest... This is a really beautiful story and I wanted to thank you for the happy ending... It was really most deserved.
dihenydd chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
I was reading this while waiting to go to the doctor's. I had to go just at the part where Edward is scathing to Bella. I was a sobbing wreck. That was probably instrumental in me getting a carrier bag full of meds!

A well deserved win. Thank you.
Ivygirl702 chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
This was amazing. And you definitely deserved winning.

Favorite line: "Shush, small person. Stop your filthy lies. Your father is super-fit and never wheezes."

Thank you for sharing.
onyourmouth chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
Amazing, loved it.
Julia-S77 chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
this story was beautifully written and it was no wonder you were first place.

it was heartbreaking when I realised Edward had been pushing an empty stroller to the park.

Great one shot, I loved it xx
Cakes18 chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
There are no words to describe how beautiful this story was. It belongs on a shelf in a booksore, selling thousands of copies. Really you did an excellent job
tsmacker chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
That was gorgeous. How heartbreaking to realize that he was walking an empty stroller. Thank you for sharing with us.
The Love Peacock chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
Thus was so lovely and moving! Xxx
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