Reviews for First Kiss
Commander of Brontdor chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
This is beautiful: really reflects the sensitive dynamic of their relationship. Like your narrative voice too.
Caitlyn chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
What a lovely, well written story!
Sinceslicedbread chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Wow that was powerful stuff. This story captured all the heady angst of a first kiss; the hesitancy backed up by desire to step into the unknown, with another person.
I'm impressed.
:)
Ninive chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
Wow! That was really beautiful.
Muffin'sback chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
I love this so much. Wonderfully written.
Auburn Red chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
Aww! How sweet. I love your MBL stories, but I think this one's my favorite because I love how you filled in the blanks of Omar and Johnny's relationship. I also love how you describe Johnny's seduction of Omar and how he seems to be the more knowledgeable one but it's Omar who leads the way (like how their relationship is later). It's so sweet and I love any reason to put those two lovely boys together. :D