|Reviews for Alpha Luna|
| WheresMyBones chapter 26 . 3/14
| Kaci2316 chapter 26 . 2/15
Love it! I think you should write another story but this time about Brady and Mack. That would be sooooooo good! Love your story and love your character Piper. Please write more!
| Biggest Fan chapter 1 . 2/3
AHHHH! I'm so excited I found your story! I read it once along time ago and it was soooooo wonderful! I read it once fell in love with your story but stupid me I didn't save it :( But Now I have found it again and the first thing I'm going to do is save it! This is such a wonderful story! You should write a book! Thank you! I can't wait it read it again!
| pswann chapter 26 . 1/14
Such a satisfying story. Thank you for giving Bran his own real voice.
| sandy huff chapter 26 . 7/25/2013
I'm a professional journalist, so I know how hard you've worked on this story. It's good, very good. But the lack of editing put some jarring elements into it that stopped the flow. Using the word rouge when you meant rougue. Using a singular noun when referring to several items. All these tiny mistakes aren't fatal, especially for a young writer. You haven't had time to soak up grammatical and punctuation rules.
The solution is easy - find a couple of beta readers. Maybe not your best friends, but an English major or editor. I'll do it for free. But do have your work edited by someone who has strong English skills. You're too good a writer to let these tiny mistakes degrade your work. Keep writing, kiddo!
| smiler411 chapter 26 . 7/7/2013
This was a really good fic, I enjoyed all the characters a lot and spent loads of time laughing. Best thing I've read in quite sometime.
| Biblio388 chapter 26 . 4/30/2013
This is an excellent fic. The story is interesting and pulls the reader in. The characters come to life and make everything come together. I really enjoyed reading it.
| royslady51 chapter 15 . 1/18/2013
Okay, I ignored the bad spelling until I found this: Obewonkanobe
It's a name, Obi-Wan Kenobi. Do not mess with the Jedi.
| Sakura Crystals chapter 26 . 1/17/2013
I have been thinking of how I wished that Bran had a happy wife to come home to and now I see that you came up with a great idea of one! I how I wish this were part of the books too! It really does capture the characters personalities! I just sad not many Bran and O/C are out there! I love this character! Anyways thank you for making this such a great fic! I hope you can put out anothre one someday!
| Becca chapter 26 . 1/4/2013
Loved this story please do one for Samuel. I think his ending was rushed in the book.
| BabyBix1234 chapter 26 . 12/17/2012
Wow. I could not, for the life of me, put this one down. You truely have an amazing talent and I believe you captured Bran well. I always hated Leah, the psycobitch. I'm glad Bran finally got his well-deserved happily ever after. Piper was a perfect match for him.
I got so into this story that I actually laughed and cried with all of the characters - something I don't usually do. I kinda started screaming at my computer when Bran decided to get stupid... The odd looks were soooo worth it. So, kudos.
I'm actually having trouble convincing myself that this is a fanfic and not part of the actual series. Wouldn't it have been wonderful for Bran to get a little romance and happiness, too?
Before I end up writing you a book, I'd just like to close this by saying you did a wonderful, spactacular, a bunch of other synonyms job on this. Keep up the good work. :)
| Kaci2316 chapter 20 . 10/18/2012
Don't get me wrong but... I don't like that Piper got pregnant so quickly. For one its very hard for humans so get pregnant with a werewolfs. It take many times and many miscarriage and most of the babys don't live. And another thing Bran and Piper didn't get to have any couple time. Now there going to have to raise a baby. I think that they should have had time to be together, just them, so that they have time to just be a couple.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
Your story is great! I love the idea for it so far! Bran if my favorite charter in the Briggs books and I love your Piper charter! I can't wait to read more!
| Kaci2316 chapter 19 . 10/18/2012
Ahhhh! No Piper! not leave Bran!
| Kaci2316 chapter 18 . 10/18/2012
Yes they finally get there happy moment!