|Reviews for Fruitcake of Doom|
| rick455 chapter 4 . 3/8/2013
Funnnnny! Great story.
| TNI chapter 4 . 2/3/2013
Of course the Lorwardians would love fruit cake but how would they feel about Figgy Pudding? And why would Yori have a Samurai sword instead of a ninja sword?
| The Life Bringer chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
this sounds like a invader zim episode
| Mr. Wizard chapter 4 . 2/5/2012
Fantastic, so many fun twists and turns.
Your Darkken and Shego were utterly believable, and kudos to SSS cunning.
And the solution, will wonders never cease?
Of course, more culinary evil is to come.
| Mr. Wizard chapter 3 . 2/5/2012
You honor us with this chapter. Great laughs all the way around. Now I shudder at the thought of what will happen next.
| Mr. Wizard chapter 2 . 1/31/2012
Each time I thought I knew what was going to happen, you caught me flat on my feet, much to my delight. Very funny chapter, complete with a most promising ending. Ah, what evil hath that cake wrought?
| Mr. Wizard chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
Sorry it's taken so long to get around to reviewing this.
Nice setup, with a solid take on their possible futures. The Ronnisms were perfect, as were the Possible family dynamics.
Now, on to the challenge at hand...
| Katsumara chapter 4 . 1/7/2012
LOL. What a tweest! This was just so funny, MA! Loved it!
| Joe Stoppinghem chapter 4 . 1/7/2012
Great story, fun read.
I felt I was watching a Christmas episode.
Glad to see everything fall into place.
I wouldn't want to be in Junior's and Bonnie's shoes right now.
Payback is a biscuit.
| Joe Stoppinghem chapter 2 . 1/7/2012
Loving the 'next guy', the 'next guy,' the 'next guy,' storyline.
I have to wonder where this is going to end up.
| whitem chapter 4 . 1/7/2012
Oh now this was too good! (even if I'm a little late reading it)
I did not expect at all where the fruitcake finally ended up, AND who was the original Sender.
I'm gonna be chuckling about this for a while...
| Stormchaser90 chapter 4 . 1/7/2012
That was totally awesome! I couldn't stop laughing at razor sharp dialogue between the characters, I loved it!
The part with the Lowardians rocked hard as well, who would've thought they liked Fruitcake? LOL.
A brilliant story overall, especially the twist at the end that Hatchet worked for WEE...I wonder what Operation Figgy Pudding is going to be like?
We might be seeing a story titled Figgy Pudding of Peril in the next Christmas season.
Keep up the awesome writing and I'll keep on reading.
Chris - SC90
| Reader101w chapter 4 . 1/7/2012
Nice ending chapter… or is it?
So, Lowardians like fruitcake? Well, it suits them, being a bit fruitcakes themselves.
If Wade could track the fruitcake, wouldn't he know immediately who it had been at?
Anyway, who knows what may spawn from this.
Keep up the very good writing that you do,
| SwampFoxTheThird chapter 4 . 1/6/2012
Haha, this is awesome! Loved Shego and Kim here, and the bit with the Lorwardians was too much. :D
| readerjunkie chapter 4 . 1/6/2012
Killer story mahler,a hard laugh right to the end. I can't wait to see what you come up with next.