Reviews for They say the World was built for two
Brobe Kyant chapter 22 . 2h
Somehow your 'finish in 5 year joke' doesn't seem like a joke anymore haha. I hope you still continue this masterpiece o7
Guest chapter 22 . 9/18
I like this story although I think that towards the end, Arya seems a bit... overly withdrawn. And I think they both have likewise blown it farther out of proportions then I gathered from the books. This is probably just because of my own view of them though. Best of luck.!
Guest chapter 22 . 9/2
I honestly thought that was good enough to be an ending, I really liked the story. Thanks so much for using your time to write this. I needed to find a good conclusion to Inheritance so I could get it off my mind, and this is very good. Kudos
Guest chapter 22 . 8/31
did u stop
Pavel.Fr chapter 21 . 8/27
Thank you so much for writing; I can’t wait to read the next chapter.
IWong29 chapter 4 . 8/27
Maybe write at the top how many years later it's been from the mirror facetime, cuz the rider are already established
Amics chapter 22 . 8/8
update. you said you will homie
Guest chapter 10 . 8/7
Hello, my name is Garrett. I'm a corporal in the US Marine corps. This means, adversely to what outsiders may observe, that my life is laughably miserable. Oft have I turned to books in order to lose myself in a more fantastical reality. My first vices were murder-mystery novels, and later science fiction.
When i chanced upon the full set of The Inheritence cycle, of which i had only read the first two books, and only as a teenager, I resolved to re-read the series, and finally put to rest my imagination concerning the fate of Alegasia. I was deployed to Cuba when i finished Inheritance.
As it may have with you, the ending left me feeling empty, desolate. The unresolved fate of Arya and Eragon destroyed me.
I have often re-read the series, and i believe that who i am as a man is profoundly based on the characters in the books. I, like many others, only knew of Fanfiction from cultural references, that often painted it in a queer, introverted light, and cast depictions of gangly teenagers drooling over fan-written pornography of their favorite characters.
Well, last night I finished Inheritance again.
And I resolved to find a better ending to the story. After looking through many titles on Fanfiction's Inheritance page, of which earlier i had not known existed, I found The Cycle Continues by Autumn(4 or 5 digits i cant recall) and while it was excellently written, and appealed to my desire to see Arya and Eragon together, it broke their characters, and her writing, good as it was, differed too greatly from Christopher's.
In her footnotes, she mentioned the former, and cited your work as an alternative.
And may i say, your work has captivated me.
Your literary style is unique, but heavily influenced by Paolini's in such a way that it doesn't break my immersion. The communication between the characters, the introspection, it is all top-notch. I enjoy your work as much, if not more than the original work. I'm far from done reading, but this seemed an excellent time to tell you how greatful i am to have found it. Thank you, great work, and know that I'm rooting for you as you wrestle the english language into submission, I'm all too aware of how intricate and difdicult it is, and I applaud and respect your efforts.
With great admiration,
Garrett A Swaim,
just some guy who likes books
mwolv chapter 22 . 7/20
This story is so well done.

I have read it twice and truly enjoyed it!

I hope you finish it, but you picked a good spot to end :)
hammer chapter 22 . 6/28
PLEASE CONTINUE YOU THIS OTHERWISE I WILL FIND YOU AND MAKE YOU FINISH THIS, JK BUT FOR REAL FINISH THIS PLEASE!
Murk3000 chapter 22 . 6/5
Hey mate. It's been more than a year since the last AN. I hope everything is well with you. I just wanted you to know, that whether you finish this story or not (for whatever reasons), it was a magnificent story till now. You had some of paolini's characteristics down while still giving it your own writer's touch. I love(d) reading your fanfic, and have read it at least thrice.
While i do hope you continue, i'm content with the content you've provided till now (pun intended). T'was a great journey till here.
Thank you for all that you've done! I do look forward to other works you may have (and you must forgive for not already checking lol)
Gardevoir687 chapter 22 . 6/2
Holy shit! This. Is. Awesome! This story is amazing! I love it so much! Just read it for the first time, it is so beautiful! I love it so much! Thank you so much for writing this! This is incredible! 12/10 - 6 stars
Guest chapter 22 . 5/21
Hello. Its been about a year since your last update when you said you moved. Im not here to rush you, Im here to say that I hope the year has treated you well and I hope that you are having luck settling in and that your writers block is getting better. I really think it would be unfortunate if this story was unfinished, seeing that there is a lot of obvious work that was put into it. It certaintly is a masterpiece. I look forward to the notification I'll get, saying that you've updated. Hope you are well : )
Guest chapter 22 . 5/18
Please please please continue this
Asydra chapter 22 . 5/14
yo you should really continue this it's so good I want more
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