|Reviews for A Swirl of Circles and Stars|
| twilightcougarrp chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
aawww This story was so sad...Poor Edward, it was so hard seeing him like that, but beautiful story about love and loss. Very well written. Thank you for sharing xx
| amberkey chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Wow how sad!
| parkesy23 chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
Wow. So sad. Very well written thanks
| Edmazing chapter 1 . 3/15/2012
This was just so beautiful and painful. Two of my favorite things rolled into one and tangled up in love.
Thank you for sharing it with us.
| lilsunnysaunt chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
Oh wow, that's so sad. It mad me cry. It sucks what happens when you lose a loved one. It can drive you mad to the point of no return. Very well written. Thanks for sharing!
| Secretive Gal chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
God! what was that?
that was simply amazing and heartbreaking.. i didnt wanna cry but couldnt help myself..
just can't believe it.. still crying...
| Silvara7 chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
You always write so well. *crying* that was so painful and yet, beautiful. He's truly done whatver it took to stay with her. *sniffle*
| Izobella Snow chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
Whoa... That was something else. It made me cry, shiver, and also gave me goosebumps. Gahh, it was good tho.
| suja90 chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
wonderful story...made me cry
| GoldenRamoth chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
Beautiful but sad story - well written - loved it.
| JasperLuver48 chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
you are a pure genuis! That was so sad and so well written and just... gah I can't even find the right words!
| TeriAnna chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
A truly haunting tale wonderfully written. Congratulations for winning Best Tradegy, a well deserved winner.
| AClumsyBrunetteBrownEyedGirl chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
:') That was beautiful.
I just knew as soon as I had read the bit about Esme forgetting to give Bella her gifts and mentioning that she had them in another bag, that your story would end like this. :)
Well, not completely, just bits like the hospital, that she was infact already dead and what he was suffering from :)
You're an amazing author! Thank you for sharing and writing this masterpiece.
I am already 7 chapters in on your other story 'Do Over.' I am really enjoying it so far.
| izziey chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
not what i was expecting: drawn out, obvious pain. instead, sweet, tender pain.
| greeneyedgirly chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
Omg, my heart hurts! You did a beautiful job on this story. It is so heartbreaking, and yet unfortunately an accurate possibility of something that could happen to a man that has lost it all. Thank you for sharing this with us.