Reviews for Before Dawn Breaks
xRDJ603 chapter 2 . 8/17/2012
Ooh sounds like a good fic! I love their 'relation ship' in this, so cute haha :)
Heavenly Rarity chapter 2 . 7/26/2012
Oh so you already did make this fanfic long before I reviewed your other story haha. You're writing and imagery is lovely. I hope you can write more with this couple. 3
the ultimadum chapter 2 . 7/9/2012
This seems very interesting. The writing is brilliant, very descriptive. The quirk was rather interesting as well... i feel as though it were stolen from Nathan Ford from Leverage. All jokes aside, this is brilliant so far. Good job and better luck to ya!
Shawnied777 chapter 2 . 6/22/2012
Oooh! I like this fic! Are you going to continue it? I'd be interested to know if she arrives safely in America and what happens from there. Will she hear of Holmes 'demise' and return to London? Or will he go to her?

Great job!
Misyel chapter 2 . 5/6/2012

I agree with you..

Many author think the same as yours..

Sorry my english not good enough..

Yeahh.. You completely right about Irene's death, many people do not like it at all.. Undeline it..

But is it true that there will be third movie? About what? My mom said that if they want to make it then it should be a sequel right?

So, what is it going to be ?

Well, but the most important thing is that Irene must not be dead soon..

Emm, by the way, I'm Indonesia, and could you please, just please not insist, make the language easier to understand? 'cause I can not see diction if i just want to know what is going to be happen right?

Thanks alot if you can..

It's a good story, and I can find the meang behind it although the language a bit hard.,.

NorthernLights25 chapter 2 . 1/18/2012
Please continue this!
yessikg chapter 2 . 1/15/2012
I'm so glad you are writing this! I was so sad when Irene died in the movie, now I get to read this to make myself feel better

Cannot wait for more :)
Jess chapter 2 . 1/13/2012
This is excellent! I hate that they killed Irene off in the movie I was anticipating much Irene-Sherlock action :(((

Do continue! I love it so far and encourage much much more!
Lightnin Spark chapter 2 . 1/13/2012
Very nice! I can't wait to read more from you!

I will not accept Irene's death. It's just not right. I mean she's 'the' woman, and I personally believe she's smart enough not to drink the tea. But I do have some solid proof that perhaps she's alive:

1.) When Moriarty tells Holmes that Irene succumbed to tuberculosis and put the handkerchief on the chess board, he removed the black queen (That being Irene since black was Sherlock's pieces). After Holmes takes the bloody cloth and leaves, Moriarty puts the piece back on. Symbolism? I pray it is!

2.) To get a greater reaction from Holmes, which was what the professor was after, wouldn't a dead body be much more effective?

3.) And finally as Holmes says, "I cannot make bricks without clay." We haven't seen a corpse or a shot of Irene not moving. No evidence! Ha!

Yes, yes, I know I'm clinging on to this thread very tightly, but I refuse to believe Irene is dead. Irene/Holmes all the way!
liine 95 chapter 2 . 1/10/2012
por favor sigue muy pronto no es cuestion de meterte prisas pero me ha encantado ;)
Zenappa chapter 2 . 1/8/2012
Oh shoot! This is an amazing story so far, I want you to continue it soooo bad! Please keep going! I love Irenlock and I'm not too convinced myself that she died. Yeah *nods* My Sherly senses are tingling and I think you might be on the right track. Please update soon!
ThePearBear chapter 2 . 1/8/2012
This was rather good and I hope you intend to continue this story. I was quite disappointed with her early death in the movie but fan fictions like these make it bearable
eastern.meridian chapter 2 . 1/7/2012
This seems like a most engaging story! I think you capture the characters really well, a thing that I find rare in SH fanfiction. The premise really makes me want to read more. And can I just say, your Moriarty gave me the creeps at the end, well done indeed!
xXxWolvesInTheNightxXx chapter 2 . 1/6/2012
I'm so happy you are decide to contuine this story! :)
MizJoely chapter 2 . 1/6/2012
Let's get the nit-picking out of the way:

"...thought what greeted my eyes..."

I'm certain there's an extra "t" in the first word. ;)

Another riveting, well written chapter. I can't wait for the next one!
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