I for one am very glad you are open to spell check. You would not believe the kind of things that people publish on the internet nowadays.
On another note, nicely written, well constructed.
As quite a harsh critic, molded by the toughest writer I ever met since aged 13, I don't find myself saying this very often, but I FELT the characters emotions. I felt the warmness of Peeta's love for Katniss, the bitterness of Gale's jealousy, I understood Katniss' doubt.
You posses a gift that I do not. Constructing a story with different sides to it. You are capable of writing a novel, whereas I am a mear poet, and writer of short stories you might find in the papers.
Use it wisely, young one, for one must never give up.
Especially on writing.
Cheers

Nice...

Wow, thats something

I love this chapter! I've read sooo many fanfics of Peeta being jealous and insecure by Gale's existence. (Maybe because I dont read Gale fics xD) And this is a very very nice change.

I love how Gale analyzed that Peeta and Katniss had sex before the beach. For a moment there, I really wished that really happened in the book.

I hope you write more KxP fics! :D Thank you for sharing this with us!

Really good I really enjoyed Gale POV

Loved your story.

To say I loved this would be an understatement! It's just perfection from every angle...even with it's length.

good story keep writing more

nice

Amazing. Thanks so much for sharing!

this was awesome!
loved all the POVs

I like it. Katniss is still Katniss, even as she opens up to Peeta, Peeta is still Peeta and Gale is still Gale (except perhaps sleeping w/ Madge, not b/c he wouldn't have experience but b/c he hates Merchant kids). It feels more like an expansion of Katniss's pov and a glimpse into the boys' than just a fanfic. I also like especially how you did Gale's pov-you made him smart enough to work up to the infamous kiss, dropping hints Katniss naturally didn't get and raising his frustration level first. B/c to him, that action didn't come out of nowhere. And his jealousy is nicely balanced, not irrational but strong b/c it's based on his real knowledge of Katniss's past and changing behaviour towards Peeta. Can't thank you enough for that-Gale is usually written so 2-d.

Of course, I also liked Katniss and Peeta's pov's, I just wanted to comment on Gale's particularly b/c it seems he's so hard to find written well. : )

heart-rending, this. it's lovely, and while i loved all three chapters, peeta's was my favorite.

I love this! I like how you wrote these 3 characters and I definitely love how you write Katniss and Peeta's intimate moments. I hope you write more KxP fics! :D

Thank you for sharing this with us.

this was purely beautiful :)