This is an amazing story. I wish you would write more, but I am satisfied with this ending as well. I loved seeing parts from Gale's point of view, and really liked how you kept them in character. Can't wait to see what you have in store in your writing for the future!

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What a harsh end! AHH I want more. And her reaction. LIke now :)

so glad you added the final chapter. perfection is worth the wait.

This is great!

Omg loved it!

I loved this! SO wonderful. You really captured the characters well.

Your story was honestly A perfect mix of your own and the real hunger games. It was meshed so well together that if it was in the real books I never would have known. You are a fantastic writer and I can't wait to read more from you!

I've only read one other hunger games story but thus first chapter was perfect. I loved it all the way you made it seem like it could have happened in the book if they had been so forward. My favorite line was - I feel in my chest is anger at the Capitol, or my heartbreaking. Perhaps it's both.- that's beautiful and so is your writing! Can't wait to read the other two chapters

This story is absolutely perfect. Please write more Hunger Games stories!

I love this! This should have been part of the books, damnit!

Need more D:

I have been waiting patiently for this update and here it is! And you did not disappoint. I love how you went around and wrote Peeta's narration. All their escapades at night is not really impossible and I think if THG were not YA novels, those actions would have been written. It is very possible for them to make love each night they slept together because it's not as if they don't know about sex. I like how you wrote about their love making and then ended it with the baby thing. Because, what could have led Peeta to say that if they weren't doing anything? Lol, I like to think that they did do it in the novels haha

Good update :)

well now I want you to continue! keep writing this story in your way I love it

Absolutely realistic! I love it!

I just loved this story, and it is absolutely one of my favorite HG fics! You definitely captured the POV of each character, and I loved how they covered different moments, but woven together make a complete story. I know you worried about accurately capturing Peeta, but you definitely did! You rock, but I hope you don't mind a teeny bit of feedback. You have just one typo (Johanna "stripped", not striped) and a tense issue "She would never shirk responsibility, even if she wanted (not wants) to...

Can't wait for your next story!