Reviews for Pure |
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![]() ![]() I ABSOLUTELY loved the story! You really know how to keep the sweetness of their relationship in it (: |
![]() ![]() haha! love that ending the bit in the book was great and i loved the way you interpreted it! xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is great. I like the gentle atmosphere and the passion. Thanks for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I want more. I want more. I want more. But no really. This was amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg! That was the .ever. You got Peeta perfectly right! I couldn't stop reading. I can't believe you're ending it like this, though! What happens? Does she get pregnant? Does she lose her baby aftwerwards? I always thought it was a possiblity. Anyways, great job, and whatever other other ideas you have brewing up, please write them! AH! This is amazing, definitely one of the best Hunger Games stories here on Fanfiction:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man. The first two chapters were great already but three is excellent! Love your style and can't wait to read more of your ideas |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very nice story. I especially love how Gale's part took place. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it so much so emotional and wonderful! |
![]() ![]() You, my dear, are brilliant. So brilliant. You have a natural way with words that just lets your stories come to life so vividly. As with the first two parts, you've gotten Peeta's voice perfectly. I still think you did Gales jealousy in part 2 better than any other story I've seen. And this part makes me believe more than any that this is the way the story could have gone has it not been an YA novel. I can't wait for you to write more stories. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it - it is perfect. So sweet and you have given it such emotion that it is all just darling - great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome job - very sweet and hot and that canon never thought of this whole factor is quite frankly where my kids started being critical - Love it and the emotion was perfect! |
![]() ![]() I can't help but laugh at gale, he so stupid XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should write another chapter about Peeta and Katniss' feelings on the beach. This is amazing! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() HECK YES! That was amazing, both chapters were wonderfully well-written, and the detail used in them was excrutiatingly addicitingXD I agree with you when you say that something must have happened between them when they slept together, and the scene you wrote was pretty realistic. I loved it, although obviously they didn't actually do it, otherwise she would have really been pregnant. Oh well. As for the second chapter, I think you captured Gale's point of view perfectly. It would have been funny to imagine his rage as Katniss and Peeta go at it in the sand on live TV haha! Supposedly they are putting him in the Hunger Games for the first movie so that he can participate more. What do you think about this? Great job, I do hope you write more Hunger Games stories! |