In gales face

I love this story! I've got to respect q person who can get into a character's head as well as you have, with both Katniss and Gale.

I LOVED the Gale POV chapter. So very in-character. Well done! Can't wait for more:)

Katie, what a pleasure it was to find your story among the volumes of SYOT crap that's littering FF lately. You write with such fluidity and your word choice is perfect. I love the characterizations you've built-so true to their personas in the books, and I hope you're going to continue. Genuine plot, angst and romance rolled into one can make for a great multi-chapter fic-glad you went beyond the one-shot. Maybe Peetas POV next?

Brava, great job.

Katie, what a pleasure it was to find your story among the volumes of SYOT crap that's littering FF lately. You write with such fluidity and your word choice is perfect. I love the characterizations you've built-so true to their personas in the books, and I hope you're going to continue. Genuine plot, angst and romance rolled into one can make for a great multi-chapter fic-glad you went beyond the one-shot. Maybe Peetas POV next?

Brava, great job.

Wow this was seriously amazing! Fantastic job!

Wow! I absolutely love it! I love pissed off Gale... Poor Madge! It's hot... And full of all different emotions! Please continue! Can't wait to see what happens next!

I loved Gale's POV! Keep up the good work!

Lovely. I've been looking to read a Peeta/Katniss story. Peeta's character was right on and Katniss' narration voice was quite good.

so i decided to read the second chapter and wasn't disappointed. you have an amazing way of telling the story like Collins. your words feel believable to be as i read, and the Gale POV was spot-on. he's a dark person, with dangerous thoughts so to see his reaction...i think you got it.

please write more, to this story or make new ones. just keep shipping peeta/katniss.

Really great. I'd loved to read one from Peetah's POV and maybe even Finick's...

But more Peetah's.

This is exactly how I could picture their first time. Well written for someone who isn't an author by trade. You should do a few more KatnissPeeta stories. Also, thank you for not using curse words. I've read some fic where it's used and I can't imagine that being natural for them during any moment.

I LOVED THIS! how about the same scenario but from Peeta's point of view?

Wonderfully written. I really enjoyed reading Gale's pov. Will we be getting Peeta's, as well?

Even if I'm not Gale's fan, I couldn't help to feel sorry for him.

Pretty good, please keep going.