Reviews for Pure |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow, this is great! i love the p.o.v from gale, too! keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nicely done on Gale's POV. I've always had a feeling that Gale knew from the very beginning what Katniss really felt for Peeta and reading this kind of gave me a clearer image of what Gale thought about everything. It's not impossible for Gale not to know about how Katniss feels and the books don't reveal a lot about Katniss' actions and how she looks like when she's with Peeta or how she looks at Peeta because Katniss is narrating it. So this is good. I like it :) |
![]() ![]() Wow this is really really good. I can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really quite like this . it sounds like everything I imagined gale to to be thinking of while all this was going on. I can't wait for future chapters! |
![]() ![]() simply beautiful! you're a great writer! |
![]() ![]() Lovely! |
![]() ![]() ![]() well done! Descriptive but in an appropriate way. Not too much nastiness, but more of the "love-making" I love it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I...cried at the end...unexpected but very good. I also love both of those songs. |