|Reviews for Traitor|
| Swrrily chapter 21 . 4/24
Hey man! Great job on the fic! Just a question, do you think you'll be makin anymore in the near future? Hope you reply!
| ign chapter 1 . 4/6
Too much water
| Guest chapter 21 . 1/6
Oh my gosh!
One of the best Fanfictions I've ever read!
It's nice to read one without a Happy end.
I think, that's what makes me love this Ff :)
| Viochann chapter 20 . 10/20/2014
I don't know if you're still active on this account anymore, but I wanted to leave a review for this again anyway.
I've read this story once or twice before, and I've just finished reading it again. My heart is aching. I had to get out if bed (seeing as lying down was not an option as I read this in bed), and I roamed around the living room mindlessly for a bit. This entire story left me baffled and dumbfounded; I've never quite read something like this.
The writing is just amazing, the way Vio breaks down gradually, how you've made it go so gradually and how it's described; it's just astounding (if that's the right word.).
That being said, I'm going all out just to say that this is hands down the greatest piece of fan fiction I have ever read, and even though it has left me grossly sobbing at times I'm really glad I came across this story.
Congratulations on your unbeatable writing skills; I hope that you'll update Violet again someday, because even though I thought that the ending of Traitor was the proper way to end the story, I'm still ever so curious to see how it will go on (and I'm hoping to see, though it's a fat chance, Shadow and Vio being reunited, of course.).
And lastly, the review is on this chapter due to the fact I had already reviewed the last one. Sorry about that! D:
| suicune95 chapter 21 . 6/3/2014
I honestly really liked this story, even though excessive torture isn't really my thing (okay I'm lying but that was a lot of torture).
My favorite part was probably Vio. Just Vio and Shadow and their personalities. Watching Vio break slowly (semi-slowly?) over the story and becoming more submissive and timid was an... Interesting transformation. I liked it. And I never quite knew what to think of Shadow, which confused me. But I liked it, psychopaths are unpredictable. You conveyed that really well.
The writing is absolutely fantastic, I wasn't entirely sure how you were going to keep the torture porn going for 21 chapters when I was reading chapter 7 but I actually managed to finish it.
And speaking of the story, I absolutely LOVE the ending. I feel like it was the only happy ending that Vio could have gotten in that situation. Watching his fire return briefly, only to be cut down before it could fizzle out was exciting (seriously my heart was pumping like crazy). For his last few moments he was Vio, and he died as he lived (no matter what the reason behind his wanting to die was)
That said I do not think I will be reading the sequel. At least not until it is completed. I loved this story, and I especially loved the ending. It almost feels cruel to take Vio back from the brink of death just to be Shadow's slave pet again.
It may not have been a happy ending, but I think it was the best one that could be given in this situation.
(Sorry for the novel of a review, I have a lot of feelings after reading this story)
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
okay, I'm not gonna bash you. You are an amazing writer with great detail and work into your stories. I also appreciate how you are grateful to your readers. However I did not understand the ending. Did Vio love Shadow so much, but was so selfish that he could not always be by his side he decided to kill himself?! It really was a very good story though other then the end. :3 Of course you can't always expect a happy ending. I just felt it was out of place.
| DustyToonlink chapter 4 . 5/25/2014
| Hylianshadow86 chapter 21 . 4/15/2014
Omg so sad! My feels they hurt and I feel like a sick person for reading this! Time to read the sequel!.
| TheDevilMayCare chapter 21 . 4/12/2014
I have no idea why I read this... but it was well written and I am going to go read the sequel now...I don't even like these kind of stories but I can't stop reading
| Link's twin brother Lexx chapter 1 . 3/14/2014
oooo dragging from the legs? heh!
how old r they?
| YEAAAAHHHHHH chapter 8 . 3/8/2014
| BarbariaBeauty chapter 1 . 2/11/2014
Hi...um...I don't know if this account is active anymore...but, I wanted to let you know that I think you are an amazing writer, capturing every slight emotion and reaction with a lot of grace, despite the situation. I want you to know that I think you are great at writing and I would like to tak with you. If there is an email address were I can send some of my questions...and at least know that you are still alive, please contact me. I find your stories really interesting :)
| fluffykittensatemypants chapter 17 . 1/28/2014
This was an amazing chapter and and I also loved all the other ones too! I can't wait too see what happens next!
| fluffykittensatemypants chapter 6 . 1/27/2014
THAT WAS AN AMAZING CHAPTER! YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER! I AM CRYING RIGHT NOW! THAT WAS TOO MUCH FEELS AND EXCITMENT! Keep up the good writing!
| this account equals abandoned chapter 4 . 1/8/2014
I saw that coming!
I'm so smart. :)