Reviews for Aleu: Tale of the Alpha
Storyteller 42 chapter 4 . 7/23/2016
A great second part of Aleu's tale. I really like it, especially her fate at the end. You take care, Arashi Kazama!

Storyteller 42
Guest chapter 4 . 4/18/2016
BRAVO!
BRAVO!
PROUD OF U!
no I don't kno u but this was an amazing story. Thank u for creating the epilogues and the story along with it.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2014
very nice
TheWildVirus chapter 4 . 4/4/2013
Dawh it was so cute at the last part of chapter 4 x3
Pyro chapter 4 . 11/8/2012
Cute Story! I enjoyed reading it very much! Thanks for writing and sharing! :)
Chibiabyss chapter 4 . 10/28/2012
this is so adorable
Mojotheomegawolf chapter 4 . 3/16/2012
You continue to impress me with this story.
Mike101 chapter 3 . 3/9/2012
Alright so that's how she got the pups. Good story.
WriterMonkey0626 chapter 3 . 3/9/2012
This is really good. Great job :)
wolfman32 chapter 3 . 3/8/2012
Oh, now that was a sweet story, now on to the sequel!
Mojotheamoroq chapter 3 . 3/7/2012
The only thing I cab say is CONTINUE. This is great
bluecatcinema chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
Nice rewrite. The story flows a little better now.
Mike101 chapter 2 . 2/22/2012
Good stuff. another chapter including the pups would be great too.
Mojotheomegawolf chapter 2 . 2/21/2012
Awesome that youre continuing this. I like the whole idea.
Exmoorpony chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
I only have two critiques.

1) I heard a herd of caribou. You mixed them up in the story. It's common, but it doesn't make it any less annoying to grammar freaks like me. :)

2) THERE ISN'T MORE OF IT! The story was phenomenal, though the plot was sort of simple. I liked Taku in there, and Aleu learning to be a wolf was great.
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