|Reviews for Mamo's Books and Music|
| Alohamora-Obliviate chapter 2 . 6/8/2012
This seems to be progressing well. I want to see where this is going.
| Alohamora-Obliviate chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
This is really interesting. A completely new take on a AU. I'm looking foreward to reading more.
| HeartsDragon chapter 6 . 5/23/2012
I love this story!
The ending is brilliant, realistic and wonderfully uplifting even when surrounded by dark themes. The relationships are beautiful. All in all a fantastic story.
| neverland25 chapter 6 . 5/13/2012
i love that
| Fuzzydustbunny chapter 6 . 3/18/2012
I just have to tell you I love AU's like this.
It seems like you've done allot of research and have a great knowledge of Hawaii and life on the island. You've kept the characters in characters as much as you can given the plot and pairing.
well written and cute
| darkorangecat chapter 6 . 2/26/2012
Lovely ending. I like how you had Steve handle the situation with Nick, and how Danny, Grace and Chin supported him. Excellent story start to finish.
| Purplehonor chapter 6 . 2/24/2012
Awww. This is so cute. Youshould definetly write a sequel to this! Wonderful job.
| l-girl chapter 6 . 2/8/2012
oh now this was all kinds of awesome. Well written AUs are so hard to find and this was perfection and a real treat.
| Wanna B. Lurker chapter 6 . 1/18/2012
This needs a sequel. That teaser scene on the couch was hot. I would love to read some more of these two.
| Lulu chapter 6 . 1/14/2012
Nice AU story. I little too short for me. I wish I more to read ...
| Silver Ardor Dragon chapter 6 . 1/12/2012
That guy nick needs to get his $$ kicked! What a jerk treating Steve like that. As I was reading that part I kept thinking that I’d be telling him off, without cursing ‘cause of Grace, and when Steve told him to leave I’d have told him to do it or I was calling HPD. I hate people who act like that guy.
I like how Grace handled what happened. While she was upset, she didn’t freak out. I like how Danny and Chin handled it too. I can picture how they would have reacted had Nick not left, or raised his hand to Steve.
I’m looking forward to reading your next story. :)
| Creed757 chapter 6 . 1/11/2012
I think this is a great start of a story that could have been amazing, it's just a little, okay way to short for me with the way that you set it up, anyway I did enjoy reading it, I just wish there were more details on their relationship besides them just getting to know each other.
| info overtaken chapter 6 . 1/7/2012
Honestly, this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read. Your writing and attention to detail is superb. I really enjoyed it! I don't normally read slash because I find they're written either really cheesy, or just not very well done/believable, but yours is awesome. You took the characters and made them your own, without morphing them into something unrecognizable. Good job! I can't wait to read more of your stuff :)
| lea chapter 6 . 1/6/2012
hey, i'm usually a big fan of au, but your fic is really great :)
| Lynxgoddess chapter 6 . 1/5/2012
Wow. I really love this story. You have an awesome way of bringing these alternate versions of our favorite characters to life. I wish we could have seen Danny and Steve's first date, though... Anyways, do you have any plans to write more? It seems like you have a lot of potential and places to go in this 'verse. Great work.