Reviews for Legend of Kaito:Ocarine of Time
lovestoread chapter 6 . 3/14/2013
im not too sure but was it the wack-a-mole reference? or that link is finally complaining about his destiny? not too sure but i did think that those parts were funny
DayDreaming0f y0u chapter 11 . 5/27/2012
This was just fantastic! I loved the ending. Oh Shinichi, unless you're the seme, you'll always be the girl in the relationship. Haha! Loved it! Of course Sonoko would plan the wedding. Mild sex, highly appreciated. This thing wasn't meant to be R-rated once they got together. It was a joy to follow them on this journey. And it made my day when everyone was together in the end. Brilliant.

Sheesh, those goddesses need to be a little more nice. They were so . . . stingy? Uh, something like that.
icarusdg chapter 11 . 4/25/2012
I'm sad to see it finished, this was lovely. I don't think I could write anything this long with a plot even if I sort of had the storyline done for me. Congratulations on completing this and I hope to see more fics from you in the future.
Shara Raizel chapter 11 . 4/24/2012
hey~! Wow! so now it's all over huh? well i'm sad to see it end, but i'm also glad for the fact that it gets to see it's end unlike all those other sad great fan fics that are never completed because the writer looses interest. i liked this last chapter and i loved the wedding. this was a great cross over and i'm happy to have read it. hope you're well and that another great fic is in the works. :)
KaT chapter 11 . 4/24/2012
I think you may already know, I wasn't all too surprised about the Kaito being KID deal. Then again, I was already a bit familiar with The Legend of Zelda as well as a bit of Magic Kaitou... Or whatever Kaitou Kid's series is called.

Now that your question is answered, let's move on to the final chapter itself. It was cute, funny, and I still can't see where the ooc is. I also get the logic behind the goddesses' heights... (Art History does that, I suppose...)

Also, nice work on building up to the wedding as well as the aftermath. Sweet, romantic, and not to mention subdued enough to tie up loose ends while still containing humor.

Oh! And yay! Sonoko did get her king! And Kazuha was Hattori's wife... Awesomes... *holding up a "10" judge's card* Brilliant work, my dear! Just B-to the r illiant.
DayDreaming0f y0u chapter 10 . 3/31/2012
Aw! Yay! They love each other. Shinichi shut up and marry Kaito. Say yes! You can adopt if having a kid means so much to you. This chapter was fantastic. Haha, of course Kaito would have that Sleeping Beauty moment. Loved how all the Sages just knew that Shinichi had to go rescue Kaito and they were together. Amazing. I can't wait for the next chapter. The epilogue! Please tell me there's not going to be an M-preg going on.
Shara Raizel chapter 10 . 3/28/2012
yay! an update! so now all we have left is the last chapter... i can't wait to find out who this new arrival is. hope they can talk some sense into shinichi! great chapter and looking forward to your last chapter. this has been a great fic and i'll be sad to see it end. eagerly yet sadly awaiting this fic's end! see you next update!
KaT chapter 10 . 3/28/2012
Cliffhanger? D'aaaw maaaan!

But, wow... I can't believe you only have one more chapter before it's all over with... It seems so surreal! Like, it was only yesterday I had first started reading this and go "Man, this fic is the shiz!"...

By the way, I still think this fic rocks.

Hmmm... I can't think of any horrible jabs of improvement. I mean, it was hilarious how every sage just knew and went "Go, Shinichi, go! Save that sexy Prince-y boyfriend of yours!" It really does make them sound stalkerish in a creepy, ghostie-ish way...

And Kaito confessing was really sweet... Even having a ring there and everything! Speaking of Prince Kaito... Love the "Stupid prince, doesn't he realize it's the princess that gets kidnapped?"

Is that your way of saying you're the princess in the realtionship, Shinichi? (Joking, joking...)

But, yeah... I'm gonna miss this story when it's done... It was witty, funny, action-packed, and just plain fun to read! Early Congratulations on a Story Well Made, Meg!
DayDreaming0f y0u chapter 9 . 3/5/2012
Harassed hero? Great line! Made me snort. This was great! I'm so glad you updated. Wonderful job. Honestly. That little scene with KID and Shinichi, made my day. Too sweet and uh . . . raunchy? Let it be known that KID will take advantage of the situation. Haha. This was all great. Hakuba managed to make his way into the story and so did Vermouth. Please update soon. We're near the end, I feel it! And that means, Shinichi and Kaito will be reunited. Dude! That also means Shinichi's gonna have to choose between the two. Oh the drama. This was great! Truly adore it!
Shara Raizel chapter 9 . 3/2/2012
yay! you updated! :D i was wondering what was taking so long but this was a nice long chapter and it totally was worth the wait. now that shinichi's got all six sage medallions... does that mean that the next chapter is the last or are you going to write an epilogue to finish the story? looking forward to it! see you next update!
KaT chapter 9 . 3/2/2012
Yeah... Nintendo is screwed up... And hey! There's always Prince Kaito dying Hakuba's hair pink when the happy ending rolls around...

But, aside from those comments... I'm glad I got to read a new chapter! And once again, I can't find any faults with it. For some reason, though... I found it hilarious that Hakuba was a florist... (Hakuba: Botanist!) Same-dif... Don't get your feathers ruffled.

And wow... Gin's momma(s) were creepy as hell... Kudo, I don't blame ya for shuddering at the sight of their unified form... *shudders myself* Ugh...

Ah! Now's the part where Gin goes down, right? Good luck! You've done splendidly well sos far, though... So I think you can do it, though!
LMeg9.20 chapter 9 . 3/2/2012
Hi me, its me. I just wanted to tell you what a great job you did on this chapter. Yes, it was a long and hard chapter to write, but you did it. I'm so proud of you, who is me. I wanted to be our first reviewer for this chapter because I wanted to tell you how awesome you, and by you I mean me, are. You are awesome. And you know why I'm giving you so much praise? *whispers* because you deserve it.
Shara Raizel chapter 8 . 2/13/2012
this was a really interesting chapter. so does link have all six medallions now? i can't wait to find out what happens next! i pray that you update soon. this is a really good and entertaining story. _
Shara Raizel chapter 7 . 2/13/2012
oh finally! i was waiting for a bigger kaishin moment. i wish there were more. ah well. this story is really good so far! why haven't you gotten more reviews? i'm not too familiar with ocarine of time (i only own twilight princess but i haven't even gotten far in that), but i have read the comic (at least i think it was a comic for ocarine) and know enough about zelda to know the story. i like the twist you've put on it. sonoko is just too funny to read and i love how kaito got jealous about the "engagement." XD that last line of this chapter made me laugh.
proser132 chapter 8 . 2/5/2012
I really like this story, and don't get me wrong, but you desperately need a beta to go through and correct your spelling errors! There's nothing wrong with your story structurally (to be honest, it's better than most, and really well done), but you're not the best speller.

It just detracts from the story, which saddens me, because I almost didn't read this because of it.

if you want to PM me, just search 'proser132', I'll show up right away.

Keep up the excellent work (and if you decide you want a beta, let me know!)

~proser132
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