|Reviews for Bitter Release|
| KowaiNeko chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
awww! I just love Shizaya! 33 its the best pairing!
| Bloom Flower chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Great job! :)
| Kurebayashi S. Teru chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
Hehe... Shizuo and izaya... They're just to cute! Nice story!
| neonrainbowneko-chan chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
that was so so... CUTE! I love the ending! good job!
| Bethargic chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
i was wondering what bitter release meant xD not anymore pffftttt...
| The-Swift-Raven chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
dear lovely human,
i adore the story. its cute and the details are delicious.
do keep wrighting.
ill stallk all your stories.
| wishIwereanime chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
My only complaint was the run on sentences. Don't use so many commas when you could just start a new sentence :)
otherwise, great job :D
| mika.siam.71192 chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Well!good enough for first attempt,but as SpellingIsImportant said, you write Shizuos name wrong LoL youve seen 10 episodes and you write it wrong?
the characters personalities i suppose if you follow the basic principles youll be course they cant be exactly in character,because are Narita-sans creations and you do fanfiction so they have to be a bit some things for them,if you want to express them better i think you should read Durararas light novels or some other funfictions stories to figure out more for their personalities.
For Izaya:he loves humanity,but Shizuo is monster so he treats him different.
he NEVER shows his real feelings,he hide them behind his trademark smirk(only if you want him to do so for the shake of the plot)
he thinks himself as a god,so he seperate humanity from him.
and ALWAYS provoke Shizuo for his "fun".
For Shizuo:he never understands Izaya and alwayas blames him for evething,so he chases him out of Ikebukuuro to has 'peace in mind'.
his cues are "shut up" and "damn you/it".The last one is almost in every sentence he says.
when he interacts with Izaya or other 'scums' he is violent and propose against evething they say,but with the other characters he is gentle and understanding.
he likes quiet and doesnt want to draw attention,the opposite from izaya who likes to instigate events(mainly troubles)and his unsteady behavior draw too much attention(from childlike to dead serious in miliseconds).
hope,i help you and didnt agravate writing to improve your writing and make a continuation to this story soon!(_)b
| Kayla chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
Oh my goodness. That whole 'for that very special little flea' just CRACKED ME UP. Dear Lord, that was awesome. Very nice, I liked~!
| Lala Fantasia chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
its spelled shizuo
| LadyMakara chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
OMG I LOVE YOU! Just wish more happened! But I still Love it! Shizaya ftw xxx
| blackkitty27 chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
YET SO SEXY!
| SpellingIsImportant chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
You misspelled Shizuo's name throughout the entrie fic. It's 'Shizuo', not 'Shizou'.