|Reviews for Alphete|
| NegletedNecromancer chapter 4 . 7/30/2015
hey so remember my old book. the gg and aa crossover. that's deleted. i have a new one. it's an aa spin-off. please read it. and i need oc characters for that story. that's all bye.
| curious cutie chapter 9 . 3/8/2012
The story is awesome!please keep updating! P.s. ailya the figure skater is kind of bitchy
| miyame-chan chapter 9 . 3/5/2012
at first i thought you were gonna delete, but whatever!
good luck with school! :D
| miyame-chan chapter 8 . 2/23/2012
yey! you updated~
and for forty days? did you give up computer time for Lent?
i think it's nice that aliya thinks that mina's a genius, but she is pretty arrogant and bratty... :)
| scott mccalles chapter 8 . 2/22/2012
Love this chapter! :)
I hope your problems clear up.
| miyame-chan chapter 7 . 2/11/2012
ah, it's okay. i had the same problem too last friday.
i see a similarity with opal and me. whenever i say something that ryhmes, i sometimes blurt out, "hey! it rhymes!"
as for aliya, she reminds me of this former classmate of mine. she isn't really b****y but is pretty annoying and has this habit to but in a conversation... :)
| Little-Luna229 chapter 6 . 2/4/2012
This chapter was pretty great! I don't think the best, though, the first chapter was really good :)
But I liked it. Update soon!
| scott mccalles chapter 6 . 2/4/2012
I agree, this is your best chapter! :)
| miyame-chan chapter 6 . 2/3/2012
finally! someone updated from fanfiction (i'm starting to get a little worried that most authors aren't updating lately..)!
it's okay if you change in third person. nothing really bad about it.
and i do have to agree this could be your best chapter (until a better chapter comes along).
there's just this small mistake: "...and through in a leotard..." it should be "threw" not through. :)
| miyame-chan chapter 5 . 1/27/2012
i had a nice week too. for one whole week, we had no subjects!
annnyywaays, i'm sure the real adventure begins the next chapter? :)
| Little-Luna229 chapter 5 . 1/20/2012
Oooh, Rizatroublemaker! :)
Hahaha, nice chappie, although "whichy" is "witchy", just wanted to point that out. UPDATE!
| scott mccalles chapter 5 . 1/20/2012
I just have to say that I love your writing. I like that you update every week too. I also liked how you made Andrea. :)
| miyame-chan chapter 5 . 1/20/2012
wow... i've studied in an all- girls school for like, eight years... so when we study about stuff like that. it's not really akward. but two years ago- okay, never mind...!
all the characters are pretty cool.
and rubye- it's a unique name. :)
| iWriteStuff202 chapter 5 . 1/20/2012
Love it! Haha I was so imaptient waiting all day for you to post this XP and daaamn, that whole awkward thing musta sucked :(
| scott mccalles chapter 4 . 1/14/2012
Oh you got Josh perfectly. And I love Liv. Great job on the chapter!