|Reviews for Smile|
| lost angel92 chapter 11 . 2/5
I've spent the last two days reading this story and I am very impressed. I love what you have done with the typical "Snape adopting Harry". I've read lots of those types of stories (they're my favorites) and this is definitely one of the most unique ones. I am very much looking forward to reading the next chapter whenever it comes out.
At what point will Evan open up to Professor Snape about what truly happened in his previous life? Will Professor Snape find out about the instance of sexual abuse that put Harry over the edge? Will he talk to Evan about his suicidal inclinations?
I love the amount of detail that you use and I also like the use of first person. With some authors it is really challenging to read what they write in first person, but not with yours. The words flow from one to next and I love the amount of insight it provides into the mind of each individual character. There is so much character development and attention to detail; I find it quite refreshing. This story moves at a slower pace compared to some, but that's alright because it's not rushed. Everything happens for a reason. I also love the longer chapters rather that lots of shorter chapters.
Thank you for sharing this story with all of us. I truly appreciate the work and dedication that you have put into this story.
| oregonbird chapter 11 . 12/16/2013
Excellent pacing, interesting people, intriguing situations. I would love to know more of what Dumbledore is doing behind the scenes. And what a way to toss in the death of the golem! I want to know what happened with the poor thing over these past months, and how the Lodge of the Chickens reacted to the news - or did Dumbles keep the news hidden even from them? What I really want is for Snape and Malfoy to be gently moving pawns into place to remove the old rat-bastard from his unassailable positions. Break his hold on the community. I noticed that Harry/Evan had an idea about that...
Moving away from first person was an excellent idea.
| loli chapter 11 . 12/14/2013
Your story is so wonderful. Its pulls you in and does not let you go. I am enthralled by it.
| lc1831 chapter 11 . 12/15/2013
So happy to get the alert for a new chapter of this story! Very well done and I can't imagine the amount of research you must put into each chapter.
| Sivy chapter 11 . 12/15/2013
Great chapter. Fel like I need to re-read it all now. I hope it wont take as long to receive another chapter!
| Bloody dawn chapter 11 . 12/14/2013
I loved this chapter and i must say that i find dumbledore really creepy _ well i hope it won't long until next chapter ;-)
| Breanna3593 chapter 2 . 12/14/2013
Um, I feel that you got sloppier in your translation in this second chapter. It was harder to read than the first. What year would it be now for your Harry? About 1998?
| carick of hunter moon chapter 11 . 12/14/2013
Well played, a good chapter that set up the furture of the story and develop the characters, there friendships, and starts to interduce your central cast, Snipe playing and been found out twins Dumbledore intrest and Interference are very good story elements, keep working on this, Thank you for your hard work and I look forward to your next update
| Mother of Tears chapter 10 . 10/16/2013
This is a fantastic story. Very detailed!
| Bloody dawn chapter 10 . 6/24/2013
Well severus is really dedicated to his slytherins I like the way you made him
| Bloody dawn chapter 8 . 6/22/2013
I really liked this chapter because Severus has finally opened his eyes about the emotional pain that Evan was going through. And he's going to try and involve himself more in his relationship with his son
| carick of hunter moon chapter 10 . 5/23/2013
This is a very well written story, it displays you skill as a writer, you have capture the voices and the personalities of the character your writing is both dark and light a story filled with horror and hope all in all a very good fan-fiction,
| Guest chapter 8 . 5/12/2013
HAFAFA! SO CUTE OMG
| SanchiaSnape chapter 9 . 5/12/2013
Gorgeous story! There's an 'et' instead of an 'and' near the beginning of the chapter when Severus is carrying Evan just to let you know :)
'It's uncomfortable et I'm ill at ease.'
| Guest chapter 10 . 5/10/2013
I really like it. the progression is good. I look forward to what comes next.