Reviews for A Golden Whisper
Soupydoo1 chapter 1 . 10/5/2015
Please, I like you version but give him a white robe! This veersion is wonderful. Now I only hope Carlise keeps believing in heaven after what happens to Edward.
Lionnara chapter 3 . 10/9/2012
woah. nice chapter ) and cute moment between Edward and his parents :)
SatinCoveredSteel chapter 3 . 2/19/2012
Loved it! I liked how, even though they were glad to see him, his father told him off for abandoning Bella. I can see them growing attached to her like she was their daughter, and being protective of her happiness as well as Edward's.

Keep up the good work! :)
BellaMarieSwanCullen97 chapter 3 . 2/19/2012
Team Edward Rules All chapter 3 . 1/24/2012
Write Edward's pov :)
nothing but a lost girl chapter 3 . 1/24/2012
nikkistew2 chapter 2 . 1/24/2012
Wow; if Bella is really dead. I have no words.
BellaMarieSwanCullen97 chapter 2 . 1/8/2012
this is good
purple1girl chapter 2 . 12/21/2011
update soon i loved it
Team Edward Rules All chapter 2 . 12/19/2011
Awesome job!
Honor chapter 2 . 12/19/2011
Ok, i've got a problem! Why do they keep going through PAIN! ITS HEAVEN!
SatinCoveredSteel chapter 2 . 12/19/2011
Hm. Edward must be in his birthday suit by now, then? ;)

I really liked this chapter as well! It was great to see Bella's POV on how she got there. And I liked that you included Elizabeth Masen as her 'guide' of sorts. :)
SatinCoveredSteel chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
Hey, good job! I love the imagery, and what they said to each other. It must have been so hard for Bella to watch everything happen to him, knowing she couldn't stop it. Also love that you made him human.
great2read chapter 2 . 12/19/2011
when you begin the story it is hard to know precisely whose pov it is.
great2read chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
I like the whole Heaven thing. it was awesome.

Off with the shoes edward.
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