Reviews for Twisted Steel
GondorCalling chapter 6 . 7/23/2014
Guess who is finally reading this... After all this time...
Lunar Sunsets chapter 19 . 11/10/2012
This is a great chapter. :D I don't quite get why the doctor was smiling near the end...I would think that the doctor wouldn't smile with that news...

But yay! Genta's pregnant! Woohoo! *gets out rainbow flag* Woohoo! Let's celebrate! x3

Anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter
Lunar Sunsets chapter 18 . 10/21/2012
._. Really good chapter. That's really all I can say...sorry...
Ninety-Six Smiles chapter 17 . 8/6/2012
LOVED IT! I love Arden's relationship with Brad. However, and I don't mean this in a spiteful way, I'm beginning to feel like the interactions between Brad and Magenta are becoming slightly repetitive. It's not that they're tedious; you always have me on the edge of my seat, but perhaps for next time you could try working on really trying to put yourself in the situation as either Brad or Genta (method acting, in a way) to try and dredge up some new emotions and conversations between the couple. Nice job with this chapter, bunny! :)
MagentaLove2326 chapter 17 . 8/6/2012
Awwwww so sad :( but I still love it :D
EsaEnai chapter 16 . 7/30/2012
:{) great job!
HeadInTheClouds130 chapter 16 . 7/19/2012
aww, Brad cares a lot about Magenta :)
Good chapter, keep writing.
Ninety-Six Smiles chapter 16 . 6/18/2012
Oh my God what happened to Magenta? Did she get mugged?

Lol "there was no one to have sex with". Indeed. XDD Ahh, Brad, living up to his testosterone-loaded manhood standards. XDD
Ninety-Six Smiles chapter 15 . 6/5/2012
Aww. Sad :(

BUT WONDERFUL :D

I love it Augh, OCD, I know that feel bro.
HeadInTheClouds130 chapter 14 . 5/21/2012
Awww, this is just so sad ),:

I hope that one day Magenta will be able to get over all the horrible things that happened to her...not that she could ever completely get over it, but just be happier. Brad had better make sure of that!

Keep writing, you're great!
Ninety-Six Smiles chapter 14 . 5/21/2012
Yay, BBW! I own all of those scents... XDDD

YAY, I LOVE THIS BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFULNESS :D :D :D :D :D
Lunar Sunsets chapter 13 . 4/28/2012
OMG! I nearly died at the end of the chapter. XDD I'm sorry but...Lullaby is my favorite song. OMGG! X3

Other than that little bit, I was kind of depressed throughout the rest. :/ Great chapter though.
Ninety-Six Smiles chapter 13 . 4/28/2012
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That was so sad... and beautiful...poor poor poor poor poor poor poor poor poor Genta! D,:

MY LITTLE EGG IS DYING! ))))):

THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL, OHMYGOD. So... so... AUGHHHHHH ghjklkjhgfcdfghjklkiuey3uope;f
Ninety-Six Smiles chapter 12 . 4/23/2012
Lol ok. I'm just going to start from the beginning and go through to the end. XD

Okay, first of all... I wish I could give you a visual representation of my ecstatic reaction at the end of Chapter One when Genta propositions Brad... unfortunately, I can't link you to a GIF, so I'll just do the best typed interpretation I can:

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I think that does the trick.

Also, I LOVE your bathtub scenes! Idk why.

Poor Magenta. She keeps miscarrying. D: I got teary when they took the stillborn (is that the correct term? I'm to lazy to look it up right now) to the gravesite and Magenta was all like "I'll come and see you every week Princess".

OOH CLIFFHANGER IS KILLING ME SLOWLY AND PAINFULLY... UPDATE SOON PLZ :D
Anne Oying chapter 10 . 1/13/2012
Come on Brad! At least pretend that you have a backbone!

Oh Magenta...
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