|Reviews for One Piece: The Queen!|
| PyruxDeltax chapter 1 . 5/5/2016
Whens this going to be updated? When Thatch is rescued, will he tell his 'family/crew' about the ASL siblings? And will they 'kidnap' (read: save/rescue) them from the marines?
| Ezakike chapter 1 . 5/28/2015
Please finish. I know i have no say sense I can't even finish my own but this is really good.
| quirkybread chapter 1 . 8/6/2014
This story has great potential. I really hope you can continue this. :)
| my name chapter 1 . 7/21/2014
Hello dear author pls.! Continue the amazing story its really damn great so pls! CONTINUE! I'll be looking forward for the next chapter...
| renee chapter 1 . 4/17/2014
I loved this I truly do not see how you can think this is bad! But it's your stories and we your readers can not force you to write. It's okay though I still Love your One Piece stories so much!
| bloodyhell99 chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
Y won't u finish this story's and the others there awesome
| BloodyMoonEclyps chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
Ahhhhh! I can't believe i haven't found this til now! *bangs head against wall*
Really LOVE your plot to this fic
Wanna see Thatch taking care of the three siblings!
Plzz don't give up on this fic, it's really good and i for one can't wait for your next chapter
| kickassdani chapter 1 . 11/15/2013
Next chapter please, and this is not a crap chapter (have more confidence). I'm looking forward to reading what happens next...
| CrystalVixen93 chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
Can't wait to see what happens next so I hope u update again soon plz.
| Celelanthir chapter 1 . 10/17/2013
I really liked this idea. Are you going to update this eventually?
Just some questions. Will one of the commanders see the three of them up there? If they do, how would they react to three kids watching the war. Would Aokiji try to protect them if they get close to the kids? Who will survive, will Whitebeard? Do the Shichibukai know about the three Kids? Do they know Shanks? If they do, how would he react to them being forced to work for the Marines?
I'm glad that Aokiji is nicer, he is my preferred Admiral among them all.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
i wonder if the children will go out on the battlefield
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
why don't you update
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
more more more more more come on I want to see the rest of the story fantastic
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
i like it i realy like it
will the siblings (ace sabo luffy) appear on the battlefield?
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
will you please continue the story?