|Reviews for Red Matter And Shatter|
| thaaatgirl chapter 5 . 8/19/2013
While I adore your stories and are infact rereading them, I saddened by the fact that you've chosen to discontinue the Red Matter series as well as the casefile which I believe are generally part of the same continous plot. I know the mentalist has taken a turn for the worst but just because a few ratings-focused fools have lost their way; doesnt mean that you should. Please write more, NO ONE DOES JANE/CHO LIKE YOU DO!
| Raven Black chapter 3 . 9/14/2012
He wasn’t there again today
Oh, how I wish he’d go away
It fits for Jane doesn't it? I like that poem but never paired it with Jane and Red John before. Lovely lovely story. Poor Jane and Cho
| Tehee chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
Amazing story with great characterization! I hope you decide to write a sequel. Too bad there aren't more of this pairing in the fandom...
| bloodsoakedleather chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
I hope there's going to be a follow up story to this one because I absolutely love it. Jane & Cho are perfect for each other and you write them so well. I'm desperate to know what happens after this.
| MentalistLover chapter 6 . 2/1/2012
(I read this when you first posted it but have not had time to review anything for a long time, so here is my very, very late review) This chapter was excellent! So many surprises. Your RJ is so amazingly creepy and twisted. The whole throat-cutting thing was so eerie yet so perfectly RJ. And Jane's "performance" was truly amazing. He really has no regard at all for his own safety, huh? He's lucky RJ didn't snap and inadvertently kill him in his rage. I guess "lucky" isn't really the word, tho, since I now fear what further punishment RJ has in store for Jane. Is he going to go after VP as he promised earlier? Or Cho? Since he said "only you will pay", tho, I'm guessing not. So now I'm more worried about Jane's well-being than the team's safety...
I love that VP is the one who covered up for Jane this time instead of Lisbon. A hugely risky move on her part, but how sweet is she? Is this going to come back and bite her and/or Jane in the -ss? I can't wait for more in this series! You are an excellent writer, and I thank you again for coming to this board.
| MentalistLover chapter 5 . 12/29/2011
RJ is just so sneaky! Standing up Jane but finding out where he's living by paying off the cab driver-impressive! And the vision of Jane waiting in the cold at the pier was so sad. I'm wondering if the woman (with the daughter) is going to talk to the police about the "creep" she met and somehow lead the team to Jane. Poor Jane, he just can't win with RJ. What is RJ going to do to Jane to convince the CBI to take him back? How badly is he going to hurt him? And is Jane going to privately confess to the team or just continue to go along with his ruse? Off to read the next chapter...
| General Reader chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
I just come here to say that this fic is the only reason I visit this site daily. Sorry for the lack of constructive criticism here, I'm just going to go to that corner over there and bite my nail, waiting for the next chapter.
| MentalistLover chapter 4 . 12/27/2011
Oh, poor guilt-ridden, worried team. How are they going to react when they find out Jane faked all of this? (assuming he returns and they do find out). I really enjoyed getting some info about Jane's early life from Pete. How heart-wrenching, tho. RJ really is going to meet with Jane? Is he going to be furious with Jane for what he has done? For some reason, I don't believe it's going to go like Jane has planned...
| SakuraDragomir chapter 5 . 12/26/2011
hey waz up
can u write more of this story plz? if u can
i love mentalist and the gang
i hope i can read more of ur storiez
queen of the night
| Gravitation gig chapter 3 . 12/21/2011
I do not understand why your story has so little reviews... It is well written and interesting. I love the hurt and comfort stories and your fiction is that!
| MentalistLover chapter 3 . 12/20/2011
Boy, you were fast with this update! :)
I'm glad Jane was so gentle with VP at the hospital. And I understand Rigsby not wanting VP to get upset, but he was a bit out of line with Jane in the office. I would think, like Jane, that Rigsby would want to have everyone looking out for VP. I can't really undertand how everyone is in denial about RJ being behind all of this; they KNOW from past experience what he's capable of!
"I don't blame you for not believing me, Lisbon. I know it's just easier." I have a feeling Lisbon is going to be remembering that line with a lot of guilt once Jane is "taken" by RJ the next day...
I understand why Jane feels like he has no choice but to follow through with his plan to go after RJ on his own since no one will believe him. I'm a little worried about how the team is going to deal with finding out he only made it look like he was taken by RJ since I'm sure they will be so worried for him. Will they be able to forgive him once he's back? I'm hoping so for his sake cuz he's doing it to protect them!
| MentalistLover chapter 2 . 12/19/2011
Jane seems overly annoyed or ashamed that Lisbon wants to protect him; wondering how much of that is the after-effect of her witnessing his abuse by RJ. "If Red John has me all alone, he'd leave all of you in peace." That line has me worried for Jane again. Is he planning something?
Oh Van Pelt, what were you thinking leaving Rigsby there alone? I guess the team will take the buddy system more seriously now that RJ has carried through on his threat (if Jane can convince them it really was RJ or one of his minions). And Rigsby protecting VP as usual; he is such a softy. Even tho I understand Jane's NEED to speak with VP, I'm glad he didn't sneak into her room and bother her now. And I'm still worried for Cho! Can't wait for the next update.
| MentalistLover chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
Oh so happy to see you've started on this story so quickly! :)
My first thought about this case was that RJ was coming after Cho and Jane. The whole moving-the-dresser thing was very cool. (Jane is the best!) You do an amazing job of writing worriedJane; he makes me bite my own nails just reading him. Jane's interview with Coates was chilling. My guess is that Jane is right and RJ is going to tell him so by killing Coates somehow. Off to read the next chapter...