Reviews for Make You Real
Jennosaur chapter 1 . 9/8
I keep coming back and rereading this! Your writing style perfectly compliments the delicate nature of this story, and I adore it! You're an amazing writer, you have such great perception for natural fluidity and flow and OH MY GOSH I LOVE THIS! Everything about this is perfect. JNSWKCNF I'm sorry for my crappy review (and that I didn't review it sooner?) but I'm honestly speechless and spellbound by your fic. You're amazing. Keep up the great work! :')
Shana-Fujioka chapter 1 . 7/21
That was a really cute one shot. Well done! :3
Guest chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
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Miss Emotion chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
Oh my god! You are a very good writer! I'm following you! Oh and I love your writing style!:D
Nica8860 chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
Ah! No Don't turn back. :I It was subtle and cute. The story draws you in, unconsciously you're not paying attention to much. Cute though.
Nathalaia chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
Oooh, that was nice! :D And... Kind of cute. For some reason. And awesome.

Nicely done!

Seta Kaita chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
alright, so this is definitely NOT M don't worry it's barely T. but i liked it nevertheless, very pure and beautiful. i like your style :D
TangerineTea chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Sweet, heartfelt, and tasteful. Wonderful work :)
tanteigirl chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
I've been away from this fandom a really long time and after seeing the last episodes of Magic Kaito, the sudden urge of reading something of this pairing came to me. Guess you can never abandon the KaiShin Army completely.

I've been shipping through some of the most recent KaiShin fics today and I honestly say neither of them convinced me completely. But you just made it!

Your writing was really good and everything was very clear. The short sentences didn't made the reading uncomfortable at all, instead it gave it much more passion. The description was slow (in the good way), subtle and delicate. I really enjoyed that too.

Thank you~

Oh, just a comment, I did read your author note, but I think it would be better for this to be rated T.
missherlocked chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
oh, now you make me want to write story about the awkward moment when kaito was inside shinichi and suddenly BAM he turned into conan.


(i'm such a pervert but i kinda love myself. :p )
DayDreaming0f y0u chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Oh! This was absolutely fantastic. Kaito is such a sweetheart and it was great to see Shinichi give himself. He wasn't hesitant and that was the best. It was a a joy to read. I could clearly feel their emotions. You did an amazing job. Just that one chance, it was all they had, and they took it to make the best out of it. Loved it.
Aniki-xvi chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
WAaah! Hot!
Phantom Hitman 1412 chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Ahh, this was so sweet.

I loved the sense of urgency that you created at the start.

I think that the theme that you picked is rather suitable for this pair. With KID not only being a thief, but a famous phantom thief, it would be easy to bee him as unobtainable. The same can be said of Shinichi, he always seems so aloof so having him there would also seem quite unreal.

I love the name plate bit. It's sweet, but quite like him, not to want to see KID's true name without permission.
Kuro chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
That was so romantic!Though at first I thought Shinichi was going to die.I'm so glad he didn' plz?
LMeg9.20 chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
I like it