Reviews for Big Events
liam chapter 1 . 7/12/2016
Great description, Though, It would have been better if i was just longer. Now if you are reading this note witch you probably are not because your to busy watching TV or playing computer games but if you see this than start writing more because i am dying to find out what happens next ;)
kittygirl320 chapter 1 . 4/8/2014
A fantastic story but maybe it could be lengthened? There are a few grammatical errors and a few ideas that could be developed. But, yeah a good story that should be continued.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/12/2014
I really like this story, it should be continued.
Skarlettefox chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
ahem, sorry, but this was sooo cute! :D
gammy1971 chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
not good
HappyDaze chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
Totally adorable! Love it!
spook of silent hill chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
Great story. I love it. Keep writing I want to know wat happans next
DubstepPhoenix chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
How touching and sweet... I envy them! This has a very feel-good air to it, definitely a short story to cheer one up :) There's a few basic grammatical and punctuation errors, however it's a decent plot for its length.
Constellapeia chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
This was sweet :]

Just a tip? When you write dialogue, always go to the next line when someone else speaks. Your writing is a bit squashed up.

Also, it would be better if you described everything more. All there is in this story is just dialogue and brief sentences. There's no mention of what their surroundings look like or anything. If you could describe more in your next story, that would be great!

~SKYE :]