|Reviews for Masquerade|
| brynnjour chapter 18 . 9/27/2017
What has Darcy done all these years that was so terrible, anyway? Just like... been a boss?
Get to it already, Lizzie!
| brynnjour chapter 16 . 9/27/2017
Okay, solidly team Jane/Georgie after that.
ALWAYS FILE A REPORT LADIES AND GENTLEMEN.
| brynnjour chapter 15 . 9/27/2017
Okay, point Darcy for taking my earlier advice.
However, how is it that no one called the police? No wonder GW keeps raping ladies all over town. If his kneejerk reaction is just to rape a person, I'm surprised he's still walking the streets at all. It seems like something should have happened to him by now, given that he's in the military and they have a code of conduct that he probably would have broken by now with like 500 reports of assault in his file.
Also, I think it might be a good idea to include a disclaimer about sexual assault in either your blurb or on the prologue page. For people who have experienced something like this it can be difficult to read about, even in a safe fictional setting, especially with no warning (attempted sexual assault, rape, violence, etc.)
Just a thought.
| brynnjour chapter 14 . 9/27/2017
DO NOT GO.
Seriously if Darcy just told her that whole story about Georgiana and doesn't follow her to the damn restaurant I'd write him off too.
| brynnjour chapter 11 . 9/27/2017
Do not go on a date with Wickham.
Do not do it, Lizzie.
Do not go.
| brynnjour chapter 10 . 9/27/2017
OH MY WORD x2
Okay, so kudos to Lizzie because I totally would have just lied and said I was drunk.
Telling the truth is like a trillion times more horrible, but our girl did it!
Big girl panties! Big girl panties!
Can't wait to see what happens next!
| brynnjour chapter 8 . 9/26/2017
Okay, so I am dying laughing right now. I didn't think anything could top the last chapter but I was wrong. Mr. Bennet seeing Lizzie's phone was the icing on the cake.
:: slow claps::
| brynnjour chapter 7 . 9/26/2017
OH MY WORD
That was so well done! There are so many masquerade-style variations that seem totally impossible, but you kept it feeling feasible and funny (even if it is a bit ridiculous) the whole time! And oh yeah DARCY IS HOT.
10/5 stars for you on this chapter. 10/5.
| brynnjour chapter 2 . 9/26/2017
Ouch! If I talked like that to my boss, he'd probably hate me too!
Enjoying the story so far!
| Mrs F Darcy haha chapter 40 . 8/3/2017
Awesome story. 2 thumbs up.
| FelineNinjaGrace chapter 8 . 7/26/2017
Okaaaaay? If Lizzie saying "He's not my boyfriend" after dating the guy and attempting to have sex with him doesn't scream "SLUT" with red letters, then I don't know what does. -_- I love the story, but I'm not used to the strange mindset of modern-day Lizzie.
| Jansfamily4 chapter 40 . 6/29/2017
This was a delightful story. I am one who doesn't usually care for modern P&P but this was wonderful. I am now off to see what else you have to offer. Thank you for sharing.
| Jansfamily4 chapter 14 . 6/25/2017
*chuckle* her heart seemed to "be in it" when she jumped Darcy. I think she fibs just a little or a lot. ;-)
| Jansfamily4 chapter 7 . 6/23/2017
Hahaha Boy! Will there be red faces at work. Great chapter
| Jansfamily4 chapter 6 . 6/23/2017
George huh? SURPRISE!