Reviews for Perfection
brothermine chapter 1 . 3/19/2014
aww I loved this so much! I love how well you capture Sands!
Death-Muncher chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
This was a cute little story! :)
Qinger chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
XD~!You are back!
maiko chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
I am your japanese big fan!

I've waiting your ouatim story sooooo much!

How grateful am I now. you never know…

Sorry my poor broken english.

I love you!
Pom Rania chapter 1 . 12/27/2011
That story was quite enjoyable to read. I think you've just reawakened my craving for good OUATIM stories.
rini6 chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
More Sands! (always a good thing) Great vignettes...kind of like several snapshots in the life of Sands, El and Ramirez. I don't know what it is, but you can almost smell Mexico when you read this type of story. Thanks :-)
Trillian4210 chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
OH, how I've missed your writing. And you!

This was awesome. And this: El likes to demonstate how well he thinks he knows Sands – which is to say, not at all. "So, are you going to shoot this cook?"


Welcome back!
pleasedeleteaccount1245 chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
I love how you've fit all four of them into a comfortable little routine together. I mean, realistically they'd probably all go their separate ways after the movie, so realistically keeping them together is an accomplishment :)