Reviews for High School Heroes
Di Blythe chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
Aw I love this
dancekiwidance chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
Is there gonna be more to this?
jffihf chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
Did not see that ending coming. Good job :)
YoursTrulyJaneDoe chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
you should make some kind of continuation to this is was a good story
QueenVictoriaXIV chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
good job
ThaliaIsAwesome chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
Wow just wow I'm speechless... It. Was. Awesome! I love ur story it's great! Wow wow wow wow... WOW!
cary99 chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Awsome story
RoyalVictory chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
This was really cute, I liked it! Just a few grammar mistakes that I would like to point out. Firstly, there was a few times you forgot to capitalize when someone started to talk. After the quotation marks I mean. Secondly, the last line, while it was adorable, be sure to add a comma after always because when you don't it sounds like he's calling her always beautiful instead of saying always then calling her beautiful which I think is what you meant. I understand this is a oneshot but I would also love if you expanded on this and gave us more background information on the whole make out session because you really caught me by surprise. It's not necessarily a bad thing but if you expanded on it more it would really help the readers to understand the characters and give us the background that makes us love the characters that much more. Overall, it was a wonderful read. Great job!
Irenerb chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Love it.
Ash Lightwood. Shadowhunter chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Perfect!
Foget-Me-Not Mi Amor chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
wow that ending snuck up behind me!
winged-saetta chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Aww that was really good! You should write more :D