|Reviews for A Father, A Lover|
| psaleh42 chapter 14 . 10/24
The worst thing about fanfics in general is that their status as a 'work-in-progress' is very much uncertain. There are fics that are written till complete end, then there are fics that went discontinued due to many issues like this one. This is an absolutely well written fic, i wouldn't go so far as to say one of the best but at least this is really really good. Highly entertaining. You've written the characters amazingly and their interactions with one another are always entertaining (particularly, Hilda and Oga. The progress in their relationship has always been the one thing i enjoyed the most about this fic). Plus, their characterization are very much faithful to the source material without any major OOC moment (aside from that one moment in chapter 7 if i'm not mistaken when Hilda suddenly cried). The plot itself is very entertaining and very much intriguing. Of course, i do understand that the characters (particularly Oga and Hilda's relationship) are very much the real meat of this fic, however hints of the events in the story such as Hilda's backstory or Oga's conflict with the demons are always highly curiosity-inducing (if that's even a phrase). your writing style is very good and very much fitting for a story with this kind of setting. I love you how try your best to describe the character's emotions and your own way of immersing the readers (or at least, me) to your story. I honestly don't have any major complaints about this fic, well aside from discontinuing it. Maybe the fact that you discontinue it here. When the plot is finally starting to reveal itself, there you go. Abandoning us readers to our own imagination of what could have been to insanity. Why man? Just when it gets so good. Anyway, i guess that's it from me. If you read this, then please, i'm begging you. CONTINUE THIS GEM OF A FIC. Thank you for your time
| Guest chapter 14 . 4/22
This is such a wonderful story. Please update.
| natsuylucyxnashi chapter 14 . 1/23
Me encanto mucho el cuento! Aunque no me gustó la separación de hilda y oga. Estaré esperando el próximo cuento!
| Us4g1 chapter 14 . 9/10/2016
Finally finished reading all of it in just 1 and a half dayyy..please don't abandon this story
| girrr chapter 14 . 8/28/2016
I'm still waiting
| LemonJellyK chapter 14 . 7/3/2016
That one moment...
You feel so sad for a character,
Your heart starts aching.
You can't help but...
| jd chapter 14 . 5/19/2016
wow i almost forgot this story and have to read it once again and i still love the plot. hopefully you will have time to update this story. i can not wait what in store for the fight.
| erzascarletuu chapter 1 . 4/21/2016
hi! I want you to continue this storyyy pleaseeee i want to know what happen next to oga and hilda yeeeeh _
| Erza scarlet chapter 14 . 4/21/2016
| KMT chapter 14 . 4/4/2016
When will be the next update? I'm in love with this story... Please don't let us wait for too long. T-T
| anita.naidu.3386 chapter 14 . 3/18/2016
At last a new update! *cries* Their first kiss was not what I've expected but it was totally worth it! *thumps up*
Waiting for new chapter update!
| Kirana Retsu chapter 14 . 2/1/2016
Oohh my gooodness! This fic is awesome! Sorry writer, I don't speak english, sooooooo...
Hablaré en español xD Me encantó este fic, de verdad me enamoré. No me importa cuanto tardes en actualizar pero con que lo hagas me contento. El beso fue épico, ya será momento de que arreglen las cosas entre ellos, mientras tanto estarán en modo emo xDDD
Utilicé el traductor de Google para leerlo, asi que perdona por escribirte en español, ojalá el traductor transmita bien lo que quiero decir.
Un beso! Espero con ansias el siguiente capítulo
| Medelie chapter 14 . 12/24/2015
Study mode? Uh-oh... Means next chapter's gonna be a while, huh?
But anyways, THANK YOU for updating. Thought It'd be stuck in the unlucky 13 forever. This is one of the few stories I actually look forward to. Even if your update rate is like two times A YEAR, its totally worth it.
| Mira D. Blackjack chapter 14 . 12/23/2015
Please... make them together and forever..! Huhu,
Btw, thank you for the update.. Hope I can't read next chapter soon... :)
| Guest chapter 14 . 12/20/2015
Great update! I feel as if a might storm's a brewin'. Can't wait to hear more from ya. Take care and have a good day!