|Reviews for The Angels Stop Singing|
| Fate-187 chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
That 's confused me...Rachel cheat?...she pregnant with who?...You said tis is not a girl!peen fic...so is Thomas a child of them?...
| Tracy Winston chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Very nicely done. And the whole "angst without death" thing was right on the money. This was perfect for the Faberry Week prompt. I always love your stories, and this was great as well. :)
| Abnab chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
this feels a bit like the hours in how disconnected and distopian it is. It was a good if depressing read. thanks!
| srortiz87 chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Are you going to continue this? The ending didn't make sense to me...
| semeolvido chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
great story! hope you'll write a sequel! great angst
| mermaiddrunk chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
This is heartbreakingly good. I love the stilted dynamic you managed to capture. So poignant.
| littleleaf89 chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Ouch! That last part hurt. Now I ask myself too "Who?"
| iAncientOne chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Wow...this is a stunner. Definitely not what I was expecting but brilliant nonetheless! So sad on so many levels.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
So, did Rachel cheat? You dont make it very clear if she is pregant by someone else or by Quinn. Part of me thinks she cheated because Quinn is mumbling "who" and it seems like the only plausible explanation, especially since you didnt put in a GP! Warning; but then again, why would Rachel be so calm when essentially admitting to cheating? A little clarity would be nice.
| ProfessorSpork chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
I was going to wait until later to give you my thoughts on this, but then you were like "I LOVE YOUR REVIEWS" and obviously my ego took this as some sort of challenge, so now I'm just going to spew words at you. BRACE YOURSELF.
Even though it's ostensibly set in the past, I feel like this is all-too-likely a future for our girls without extensive amounts of honestly and therapy. And it's not violent, it's not dangerous, it's not abusive- it just kills you softly with oppression and tension and words left unsaid. Too often, Quinn just gets a free pass from fandom in a way that Finn or Puck never would, simply because she, um. Has Dianna Agron's face, probably. And this is what happens when Rachel gives her a free pass, too.
One of the worst parts of Quinn becoming her father is that it forces Rachel to become her mother- so really, I'm on Team Thomas, here. Rachel only has so much strength to spread between the two of them, and the prospect of a sequel intrigues and terrifies me. No good can come of this.
| MsChloeMa chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Wait, did Rachel cheat on Quinn? I'm kinda confused cause I skimmed through this quickly to get to a wedding. But it seems pretty good so far:)
| redashford chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Oh. That's real sad. Hmm. I wonder if there would be a part two?
| gleelover16 chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
I love how you portrayed them in this era and how angsty it was. Love how you wrote it from the point of view of Thomas and overall really good job :D