Reviews for Truths & Lies
Ella Press chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
Wow, loved it! So sexy, I love this couple.

I'd only watch it when you write your dialogue tags. When you make a character speak, you immediately write He did/said/grunted/etc after the dialogue and it can get repetitive. Use more periods, and pauses.
KBexEverdeen chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
awesome *_*

let's get peter and olivia some handcuffs!
angellcakes23 chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
hot! I WISH this happened on-screen! lol
butterflybby chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
That was hot! Too bad it didn't go further... ;)
ab89us chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
I remember reading this when you first wrote it...Still love it.
mara lena chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
thank you for sharing this one! it was much needed and i liked your way of story-telling, as always ;) really miss that light-hearted bantering. my favourite line: "I'm not sure I really stood a chance at resisting you from the moment we met." love the implications.

could you have a look on your hard drive, maybe there's more to find?

btw, good to see you're back! :)