Reviews for Breathless
abrant554 chapter 16 . 1/10
There is only a couple of things wrong with this story...'it is too short'...'it should have been longer'...
'could have had more chapters'...nough said. :) Excellent. Pleasure to read.
abrant554 chapter 5 . 1/10
missblueeyes63 chapter 16 . 11/8/2015
Good story. Enjoyed the read.
prince-bishop chapter 11 . 5/25/2014
No don't want Gibbs/Tony time that is boring Tony and Ziva time is much much better, besides who want's to spend time with a Gruff old Git like Gibbs, good story
Amy Rackley chapter 16 . 7/11/2012
Good story. Only problem was the bad language but overall not bad.
L8E IN TIME chapter 16 . 3/27/2012
Very cute story! I loved it so much I had to go back and read it again!
Ryley chapter 16 . 2/14/2012
Absolutely fabulous! I loved just about every word. You really did your homework with the medical stuff. That gets you extra points in my book. :) Can't wait to read more of your work.
danielle007 chapter 16 . 1/17/2012
Too cute. D I like the snippet of Kate.
wandsnroses chapter 16 . 1/17/2012
lizrat66 chapter 16 . 1/16/2012
Really enjoyed this.
starryjules chapter 16 . 1/15/2012
Awww *grins* What a lovely ending! I so enjoyed this story and would say I can't wait to read your next one...but I just did! Can't wait for many more from you; you are a fantastic author. Thanks for sharing!
ShortSarcasm chapter 16 . 1/15/2012
Loved it
Glow60 chapter 16 . 1/15/2012
Thank you for writing the story. I really enjoyed it and hated to see it come to an end.
mprmusings chapter 16 . 1/15/2012
perfect! amelia the ninja kitty :D thank you for this story, i look forward to your next story. thank you again.
wandsnroses chapter 15 . 1/14/2012
hola! read the whole story today and think its pretty awesome! nice job!
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