|Reviews for First Holiday Home|
| patheticboneslover chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
this story (including the longer one) are so cute. so well done and i really enjoyed the babe theo parts. made it so believeable. good job :)
| Dontgotaclue88 chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
Gawds! So darn cute! Swear I felt warm fuzzies from Snape there for a few seconds... lol! ,
| ds862 chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
This was fantastic as an epilogue! It was a great way to end the story. Well done!
| jules3677 chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
What a sweet tale to read on a murky cold day. Gave me a nice lift to read this gentle tale. Liked the interaction between Harry & Severus, very pleasing. Theo was a treat, well created. Thankyou
| Pyrane chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Ahah ! Severus's quite used to be his "Daddy" now ;D
| aliceAmnesia chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
haha love this story !
I read it and was thinking who wrote it since i didnt look first, when i saw ' ' i was like OH right obviously. all my fav stories are by you !
| Kaynova chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
I think this and the coiners paper trail are my favorite of your stories. I like the way that Snape stays snarky, and that Harry is both strong and vulnerable. I'd love to see another chapter in the story of Theo, Harry and Severus.
| htdcd chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
Well-written and engaging as usual :) I'd read anything you wrote - please tell me you're working on something publishable! I'd buy it. And read it. And love it.
| Kristine Thorne chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
This was really lovely.
| SnapesYukuai chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Amazing story! _oh, and happy christmas, of course. Lovely scenes and I especially liked the idea of dinner with the Dursleys.
Anyway, Harry Snape and Theo were simply adoring and brilliantly incharacter at the same time.
Thanks for writing this, your Melfis.
| Knocks chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
Happy Holidays to you, too, dear!
And I enjoyed this story. Love the characterizations and backstory!
| kittycat5261 chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
Haha I liked the AVPM reference! it was a really cute story as well. I liked it a lot!
| MissyBlack31 chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
This was wonderful! I'd missed this little family. Thank you for the update!
| jazzy2may chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
love this story! The perfect christmas story! just perfect! _
| Aikaru chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
I loved this story now I have to go read A Coiners' Paper Trail to understand how this relationship happened.