Reviews for First Holiday Home
Hex chapter 1 . 6/15/2015
I can't stop smiling as I picture their beautiful family.
patheticboneslover chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
this story (including the longer one) are so cute. so well done and i really enjoyed the babe theo parts. made it so believeable. good job :)
Dontgotaclue88 chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
Gawds! So darn cute! Swear I felt warm fuzzies from Snape there for a few seconds... lol! ,
ds862 chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
This was fantastic as an epilogue! It was a great way to end the story. Well done!
jules3677 chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
What a sweet tale to read on a murky cold day. Gave me a nice lift to read this gentle tale. Liked the interaction between Harry & Severus, very pleasing. Theo was a treat, well created. Thankyou
Pyrane chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Ahah ! Severus's quite used to be his "Daddy" now ;D
Thanks !

aliceAmnesia chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
haha love this story !

I read it and was thinking who wrote it since i didnt look first, when i saw ' ' i was like OH right obviously. all my fav stories are by you !


Kaynova chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
I think this and the coiners paper trail are my favorite of your stories. I like the way that Snape stays snarky, and that Harry is both strong and vulnerable. I'd love to see another chapter in the story of Theo, Harry and Severus.
htdcd chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
Well-written and engaging as usual :) I'd read anything you wrote - please tell me you're working on something publishable! I'd buy it. And read it. And love it.
Kristine Thorne chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
This was really lovely.
SnapesYukuai chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Amazing story! _oh, and happy christmas, of course. Lovely scenes and I especially liked the idea of dinner with the Dursleys.

Anyway, Harry Snape and Theo were simply adoring and brilliantly incharacter at the same time.

Thanks for writing this, your Melfis.
Knocks chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
Happy Holidays to you, too, dear!

And I enjoyed this story. Love the characterizations and backstory!
kittycat5261 chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
Haha I liked the AVPM reference! it was a really cute story as well. I liked it a lot!
missmatchedromantic chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
This was wonderful! I'd missed this little family. Thank you for the update!
jazzy2may chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
love this story! The perfect christmas story! just perfect! _
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