Reviews for Story of Us
magdalenad chapter 4 . 7/18/2012
will you update, please? i can't wait!
pipelynn chapter 4 . 2/28/2012
great introduction. cant wait to read more. too bad the girls at the lunch table didn't say much to make bella feel more welcome after she told them about riley...oh well! nice that edward seemed interested in her daughter. sweet!
WallaWallaMama chapter 4 . 2/22/2012
I love Bella's reaction to Edward. And I hope at least one of the girls at work tried to befriend Bella despite the fact that she's a single mom. Glad to have a chapter!
married2thcoach chapter 4 . 2/19/2012
I loved this update. Great job. I had to chuckle on how Bella reacted to Edward. I'd be the same way being in the presence of a sex god. LOL. Looking forward to more. :)
tff000 chapter 4 . 2/17/2012
wondering how old e is
cullengirl08 chapter 4 . 2/15/2012
I don't blame Bella for being leery of the other girl; she doesn't really know them well yet.
TrulyOutrageous chapter 4 . 2/14/2012
Love it! Love her reaction to Edward and how she was able to pull it together. Looking forward to the next chapter.
fannygilmore chapter 4 . 2/14/2012
I think this story looks like fun.

Belatrix233 chapter 4 . 2/14/2012
Wonderful starter of the story, and i loved the chapter, post new one soon!:D
snowtiger1 chapter 4 . 2/14/2012
love this story so far can't wait for more
Leibeezer chapter 4 . 2/14/2012
I just found this story, and I think you are doing a great job. I can't wait to read whats going to happen next. Please update soon.
userunknown123 chapter 4 . 2/14/2012
I think youre doing a wonderful job and I cant wait to read more! Thank you!
BilliCullen chapter 3 . 1/16/2012
You've got an excellent start, I hope you'll continue soon.
masengirl chapter 3 . 1/7/2012
Love your story so far …can't wait for more.
DeenieMarie86 chapter 3 . 1/6/2012
Hey, Great job so far! Can't wait to read more :)
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