|Reviews for the art of description|
| bookworm83197 chapter 1 . 6/14
OMG THIS IS GREAT! HOW DID YOU EVEN WITH THE FIRST VERSION IT SOUNDS SO AUTHENTIC XDDDDDD *crying tears of joy and awe* AND THEN TOPH BEING BORED AND THE HISTORY-BOOK-ANALYSIS-ISH ONE AND THEN IROH! \O/ IROH IROH IROH \O/ ALL SHALL BOW TO THE WISDOM OF TEA OTL
Sorry, this seemed the only way to truly express my feels after reading this 8DDDDD
| Merkitten chapter 1 . 10/10/2014
| TripOverFlatSurfaces chapter 1 . 6/26/2014
Pfffffffffffttttttttt Version 2 is beautiful.
| Thimble chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
Nice story :-)
| Arysthae chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
Beautifully understated. It was elegantly written and I love the different version. The first one is probably the closest to the truth, despite my dislike for the flowery language. And Iroh's last line was brilliant and very true. :) Nicely philosophical.
| stars shine out chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
Beautiful. Gotta love life changing field trips with Zuko!
| it's simply me chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
This is absolutely hilarious! Art of description indeed XD I very much liked the idea, and it was presented wonderfully!
| MainCrick chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
lol. It made me smile
| MoonClaimed chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
Now this? This is just fun. D
| PrincessLazyPants chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
hahah oh Iroh. So wise.
| Kimberly T chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Yup, you made me chuckle!
The first version was quite interesting; definite echoes of a religious text. Any one in particular?
| tomboy 26 chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
lmao .. I loved this. It's funny how things can be described .. how we each make our own version of things to either seem so sophisticated or really simple XD
Only thing: Do you mean Bei Fong Clan?
All in all .. this was gold _
| Keltena chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Awesome play-off on that one throwaway line from Toph. The first part is my favorite, just because of the ridiculous amount of embellishment.