Reviews for A Sage Among Wizards |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story, I like it very much! Is it abandoned? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this so far i now im like really late but cant wait for what happens next.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. You should mark it complete, or abandoned though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far. I like how Harry's so nonchalant in front of everyone. Sad to see this is probably abandoned but I hope it comes back someday. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know why everyone is so mad about this Naruto's mindset. He's literally hundreds of years old, and has outlived all of his loved ones, while also bearing the weight of the entire world on his shoulders. Of course he's not gonna be exactly the same as his 16 year old self. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What i got from the first chapter. This is an OOC naruto based on how your ideal canon looks like. This is the shittiest version of Naruto you could've chosen. justifying body snatching and immortality for "the greater good". If there was any humor in this story, it's completely ruined for me. It's like i'm the bystander watching a bunch of bullies pissing on a bunch of defensless kids and laughing their asses off. That's the closest comparison to me reading this story i could think of |
![]() ![]() ![]() in the first chapter alone you have changed who naruto is as a character. by making him say innocent children must be sacrificed |
![]() ![]() This writer is an idiot. I’m out. I hate stupid people and this writer MORE than qualifies. |
![]() ![]() The story was going great, till this fucked up stupidity with his wand. That I think was the most retarded route you could have chosen for this. Major negative points for this idiocy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() My issue is that I doubt that a 190 year old leader of a village filled with super powered soldiers and keep them placated would know of this thing called Diplomacy, and not insult the culture of a person so heavily that they'd end up attempting to murder him, despite it causing them considerable issues. Naruto also wouldn't know that it was his mother's sacrifice that allowed him to live so yee yee |
![]() ![]() ![]() This Dumbledore would make an excellent Shinobi, mentally Anyway. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I find the idea of metal being a poor conductor of magic to be strange. But I think I can see where you are coming from with your idea, magic can be seen as a force of life and nature, where as metal is commonly seen as cold, lifeless, and unnatural. However you could see it as a great conductor of power, That Is forged by the stars them selves (iron atoms are made in the heart of a star). However it all Simply depends on your point of view. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how the fic is going, hope to see more updates! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story. Looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() You did a good job with the twins. Broke tropes while keeping them there. 5stars. |