Reviews for A Sage Among Wizards |
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![]() ![]() ![]() interesting. cant wait to read more. keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOME idea, I hope it is still very much Harry with parts of Naruto's personality but i guess to have many of Naruto's powers it needs to be a large portion of him too. Looking forward to see where you go with this. |
![]() ![]() good idea for a story. please update! also, i don't understand how was it that the kyuubi was destroyed. shouldn't he have fused with the other tailed beasts to become whole again similar to namekian fusion from dbz? |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting! |
![]() ![]() i like it . carry on!;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I find that this story has a lot of potential and i hope to see more soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm. I love most of this concept- every so often a good curb-stomp type fic is fun to read- but I'm a little bothered by a couple of things here. The killing/merging with Harry is a big thing; I don't really think there's any chance of Harry remaining in that body. But why would 'Destiny' send him into an already existing body? Wouldn't it have him be completely reborn, *as* Harry? Because as it is this method seems to invalidate the prophecy unless it was just fulfilled on Halloween with both parties deaths... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent start, I have great hopes for this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it, and I look forward to a Super Harry. I also hope there's some bashing of Ron(Though I can live with out it) and Dumbledore(He's a manipulative guy, I mean he keeps sending Harry back to his abusive relatives and must be watching the whole thing, that and he knew the prophacy that involved Harry and did nothing to train Harry). |
![]() ![]() ![]() How truly interesting... Will you update soon? - |
![]() ![]() ![]() you have piqued my interest |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh yay! You're one of those awesome authors who can take constructive criticism! :D Here's my opinion: the concept seems interesting, though you could tone down Naruto's powers a little. Also, when starting a new paragraph of conversation, there should be no quoation mark at the end of the first paragraph. Or second, if you have three paragraphs of the same person talking. I'm not sure if I explained that right? I'm all for Harry/Tonks. Tonks is fun. If not Tonks, maybe Harry/Luna? Your style is great! The way you describe things especially caught my eye. It isn't overly poetic but has just enough detail to get the job done. Now you mentioned Ron and Dumbledore bashing... I'm hoping for no Snape bashing? If he is supposed to provide a conflict, no bashing is necessary, just keep him in character and he'll do the job. I just hate seeing people write an OOC Snape just so they can bash him. I'm looking forward to your update! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this sounds intresting and I hope that you keep it up and update again real soon because I am really eager to see just what you are going to have happen next. |