Reviews for A Sage Among Wizards |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Dudley has voldemort's soul piece in him?! |
![]() ![]() A kid with too much accidental magic incidents would be considered "too emotional" and taken for medical "treatment" / magical restraints applied to prevent "accidents". |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good goblin handling, by you and harry. |
![]() ![]() Mediocre at best and borderline pedophilic. Flirting with an 11 year old is not OK, the story portraying it as something good is disgusting. You overuse the word "just"; in chapter 6 alone, you used it 45 times. The way you write makes it read like a post action report, not like a story. The grammar is fine, though you need to work on your spacing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, the beautiful irony that Snape describes Bad Faith's character arc so perfectly. Really enjoy this story, wish it were longer. |
![]() ![]() very good |
![]() ![]() this is so good but it felt short not just this chapter the whole story on one it needs to continue its very well done its good but it needs more chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() trash cant get past chapter 2, he should be a war veteran that was even willing to sacrifice an innocent kid so he can save many and yet his such a trash when he transmitgrated to harry, he is a shinobi and yet he didn't do the basic thing a shinobi should do gathering information, he didn't even investigate the so called magic when his already 5 and already mastered his old technique, he only did is to PRANK dursley for what? he can just used genjutsu on them and be done with it and yet he allowed them to abused him for no apparent reason of so he can follow the canon, the author even waited harry/naruto to be 11 before he act like a shinobi, trash fic and he was supposed to be 190 years old and he acts like a dumb kidtrash cant get past chapter 2, he should be a war veteran that was even willing to sacrifice an innocent kid so he can save many and yet his such a trash when he transmitgrated to harry, he is a shinobi and yet he didn't do the basic thing a shinobi should do gathering information, he didn't even investigate the so called magic when his already 5 and already mastered his old technique, he only did is to PRANK dursley for what? he can just used genjutsu on them and be done with it and yet he allowed them to abused him for no apparent reason of so he can follow the canon, the author even waited harry/naruto to be 11 before he act like a shinobi, trash fic and he was supposed to be 190 years old and he acts like a dumb kid |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shenanigans… |
![]() ![]() ![]() Funny shenanigans. |
![]() ![]() ![]() (Rat, tiger, horse, snake, boar, ram, monkey) SHENANIGANS JUTSU! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I haven't checked your profile so I don't know if you did this bad can you do this again and have him in another world with all the memories of Naruto Harry |
![]() ![]() ![]() i would like this fic more if snape and dumblebitch weren't so annoying that i want them dead via rasengan this moment |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its an interesting fic . I wish you would continue these but it cant happen since its almost 10 years back |
![]() ![]() Thanks! enjoyed the chapter |