|Reviews for Doki Doki Temptation!|
| CloudEnvy12 chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
Great chapter~! I can't wait for the next one~ oh and while I was reading I noticed this sentence: "I didn't want to -actually I did- want to betray their wishes on becoming a doctor,"
When you put in the '-actually I did-' you put want to twice, once before and after, I suggest the sentence be like this: "I didn't want to -actually I did- betray their wishes on becoming a doctor,"
Sorry it's my grammar side kicking in, my friend engraves every correction she has to make on my stories into my head ' hope you don't mind, well until the next chapter~ XD