Reviews for The Protectors Of The Zone
GreenOne23 chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
I found this to be a very interesting and insightful look at the lives and activities of Monolith soldiers. It was interesting to hear their side of the story rather than shooting them on sight. I enjoyed the way this story gave a more human nature to the Monolith rather than mindless fanatics as they are portrayed in the games.

However, it didn't make me like the Monolith but it did provide an interesting alternative to the S.T.A.L.K.E.R story. Perhaps now when I am shooting them I will think about the man behind the chanting.
Faxx chapter 2 . 12/30/2011
Keep up the good work, I can't wait for chapter 3.
Saint Dane01 chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
There's definitely some good stuff in here but I think your writing style could use some work. The tense changed a lot, for example one line says "a man shouts" and the next line says "a rookie asked." You should keep it consistent. Aside from that I just need practice to find your voice. As it is, the writing style just seems kinda jumbled and basic. Not bad, but with some practice and revisions this would be even better.