|Reviews for Words That Jingle and Tears That Bloom|
| PearlesantlRose chapter 1 . 6/3/2015
This. I liked it very much.
| Nherizu chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
That was so sweet. I like the way you interpreted the theme; it's unique!
I really enjoyed reading this one :3
| Kayday chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
i kinda want to do some deep fanart for this, though being in ap art, if its not a major project and im drawing it- its insane. (as in there would be no time to do it and no one would remind me when there was time)
i didnt know what all the flowers and gems were but im glad you knew or took the time to look them up. c:
| TheEndofTag chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
wow! i just love this story! it has a different spin to it. . of course the best part is the end when Kanda and Allen left toether! .
| moshimellow chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
Such an interesting idea. Beautiful story~ :) Really enjoyed reading it.
| Kashmir-BBJ chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
Ok, i've read the other Yullen week about Allen being the moon, and i really like that story BUT this one is awesome! I love how yo've put some "Grimmìs fairytale" in this fic! So this one will be added in "favourites" 3
| JayPay chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
I cannot begin to express how awesome this story is! Fairy tales, Yullen, and fantastic writing! BRAVO! I shall read more...
| Celestial Eclissi-Chan chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
the story was good, but really weird
| Yoru no Tsuyu chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
This was a pleasure to read. I only found ONE mispelling, just making it all better. This was sweet, thank YOU for sharing this with us.
Have very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year :D
| tlinh chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
That was really, like, really good
I'm looking forward to your next stories
| ofnisaofunsdf chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
So in the end, after he spoke his thoughts the money stopped falling from him mouth? ... YAY!
| AnimeFreak4261 chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
Mmm, my goodness was that ever amazing. I've missed you and your stories so much; the detail, the description, the personalities, the way you write Allen and Kanda...
I must say, I love this one shot. It reminded me a lot of a fairytale I read, perhaps it was that one, Diamonds and Toads. The one that I read had two sisters though, so I'm not sure if it's the same one, because I can't find the book.
Of course, of all the people in D. Gray Man, Kanda would be the one to care the absolute least about ay amount of wealth; he's just not that kind of guy x3
At the end, when Kanda was knocked out, I won't lie, I got a little bit worried. I didn't want stupid Narien to kidnap Allen or something, but I most definitely didn't expect the kid to knock him out with a heart-sized ruby xD But I think it was definitely the perfect way to end it.
I can only imagine how hard it must've been for Allen to stay silent so much of the time. No talkign to himself, no humming or singing, talking on the phone would be an issue. No laughing...must've been hard. I'm glad that Kanda, and even in a twisted, offhanded way Narien, could help him get away from that :3
But anyways, yes, I love this fic, and will definitely be coming back to reread it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
Haha, you're back! And with a vengeance, too. Welcome back.
Now, about the story. Great, as per usual. Let's name the reasons, shall we? First and foremost, I am biased. I love modern, realistic updates of classic fairytales (see Francesca Lia Block). And it thrilled me that you did this justice. Kanda was admittedly a little freaky with how utterly nice he was being. But then again, it could've had something to do with the fact that Allen couldn't talk, so they couldn't have their usual knock-em-down, drag-it-out arguments. (I still spat out my water when he offered to make breakfast.) Other than that I had no real complaints (: Allen's observations on the gruesome nature of fairytales? Priceless. And sweet. The realistic implications of what would happen to Allen if anyone knew? Kidnappings and forced charity and money-grubbing. Sounds about right.
All in all, I enjoyed this (:
Can't wait for more.
| Zuza chan chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
When I first read your fanfictions, I thought, it couldn't be better, and now, a year later, you prove me wrong! This style of writing is so unbelievably beautiful, and I can't even imagine how you thought up the plot! Your words are really magic, it wouldn't surprise me if coins fell out of your mouth while talking! The characters as, like usual, so perfectly described and cute, I love it~~~~~ I'm happy you're back, and hope to read more!
| CottonCandyHaze chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
I HAVE MISSED YOU TERRIBLY
; ~ ;
Well..the writing, as I did not get to know you, but I'm sure if I had I would have missed YOU - yourself, not the words - terribly...
And now I feel selfish.
Your writing is as impeccable as ever. I mean my GOD you had me eating every last word.
It's all like...like...poetry almost.
For lack of a better term - or phrase - I am going to say it's like poetry.
Your capture of everyone's personalities is GENIUS
- and I believe I messed that word up again-
I mean my goodness, I am quite jealous of the way you do things. It seems as if writing to you is as effortless as breathing is to me or anyone else.
I wish I could write this way... Fan fictions especially at the moment, as I feel I fail at doing the characters justice.
AND MY GOOD WOMAN/MAN
THANK YOU FOR REMINDING ME OF THIS FAIRY TALE
OH MY SWEET GOODNESS
I used to LOVE this story to DEATH as a child. The thought of gems falling every time I spoke and flowers appearing whenever I cried..
It was all so magnificent to me..
Of course NOW I take those thoughts back, as it seems like a rather...dreadful way to live.
I just thought they would appear out of thin air, not even starting in the mouth, but at the very tips of ones lips...
Now I know better.
And the title? I would have NEVER been able to come up with better.
Further reason for me to envy you. I am so awful with titles you see... Names and the like.
Speaking of names, I rather like the siblings you created.
Not like-like them, but I enjoy the idea of them. The brother being so loving towards his sister that he's practically in love with her, meanwhile the two are as selfish as can be towards the rest of the world..
I think that still accounts as sinful..
Wait, yeah it is.
But still, I absolutely loved the idea of you putting them in. They were perfect in the roles given - and yes I know they are OCs, but you see what I mean - and you know, I wouldn't mind if I saw these two again.
I care not which roles they take..
Ah, look at me sounding as if I am giving you orders
PLEASE KEEP WRITING.
OH MY GOODNESS.
You are one of the BEST writers on this site and it would be a horrible SHAME to lose you.
NEVER think you've done terribly. NEVER.
I am looking forward to your next story, no matter how long it takes.
Oh and as for Doors and Keys...
My mind is telling me it's an Alice in Wonderland theme..
I don't know why, and I could be so far from the truth that there is no hope in coming back..
Time to submit.