Reviews for The Man You Make of Me
cecilia4059 chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
Love this raw, passionate and somewhat out of control Carlisle. And Edward is sweet and, submissive? No, I don't think he is anywehere near being submissive, he has Carlisle wrapped around his fingers and he plays him like a puppet. Is it possible that you can write more about this pair? Maybe a few more chapters? You're a fantastic arthor. Thanks for writing.
MusicMovesMyPen chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
I wish I had words to describe how I feel about this fic, but I guess I'll just settle for magnificent.
sasharose11 chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
Amazing! I don't remember a Carlisle quite as possesive as this. Loved it!
aStubbornRose chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
theCULLENfan chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
I feel like I'm on fire! Really hot and I REALLY enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing this story.
Breaking Aurora chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
Very nice! I came across this story through The Fictionators - I believe it was MsKathy who rec'd it. I'm a big slash fan and C&E are probably my 2nd fave couple behind J&E but this one was great. I love how Edward taunts interesting to see Edward sort of dangling Bella out there, just daring Carlisle. It's animalistic but you also show their loving, tender side. Lovely. Thanks for a great one shot. I'll be sure to check out more of your work!
Aeromance chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
Wow, that was disturbingly hot and hotly disturbing.

And deep and lovely.

I feel like you took everything I wanted (spanking, throat fucking, rimming, forceful but loving sex) and said "You want it, bitch?" then shoved it down my throat until I was gagging. And I loved every minute of it. But I'm kind of sore after wards and it makes me think about asking again.


Although, I think using his teeth to cut a line down his back was taking it too far. A bit.

Besides that, amazing. I almost wish you went into what changed, like what made Carlisle really see Edward as a sexual creature for companionship and made him forego the others (Esme, Rosalie, Alice, etc, etc).

But I still loved the tiny connection to the canon.

What would have REALLY blown my mind is if you brought in Esme/Alice/whoever at some point, indicating it was still canon but they were just lovers in secret or whatever.

Alas, this was fantastic and I thoroughly applaud TwiKink whatever that compelled you to write this.
Burntcore chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
Sweet and hot all at the same time, good job.
CelticGlamazon chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
Oh my! I love this side of Carlisle, Dominant and possessive. Great work.
BLilTXgirl chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
Definitely a different (and hot!) side of Carlisle. Edward cracked me up with his taunting.
bmango chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
there was much flailing about this on twitter this afternoon, and i realized i hadn't read it yet. perhaps not something to read at work, but oh my, definitely going in the favorites pile. jesus christ, woman. you are amazing. -b
Beautiful Figment chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
This was absolutely fantastic. I'm at a loss for words to form a more eloquent review than that. Loved every shred of it.
sapphirescribe chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
Gah! This is gorgeous! Perfect vampslash Carlward. Perfect. Possessive, needy, bossy, pushy, but still loving throughout. I LOVED the thought/whispered conversation at the hospital. Really the whole hospital sequence in front of Bella was perfect.

I don't even have any more words. I just... it was perfect.
ArcadianMaggie chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
Possessive!Carlisle! Just the way I like him. I really loved it-Edward using Bella to provoke Carlisle, the mindreading. Fantastic fill. Thank you!
frapanappy chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
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