Reviews for Aftermath
Krymsyn Vyxyn chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
It was a good story. However, I must admit that I had to copy all of your fic and replace the I's and such with hers and she's. First person is very difficult and annoying for many readers to read and I feel like it's harder to grab the character's emotion and colorfully display them. Good job though.
huan05 chapter 2 . 1/9/2012
Emotional chapter, you had written Riza's self-blame well once again, I could feel her emotions through your words. Not forgetting the embrace scene of Roy and her, it's so sweet. Keep on writing!
huan05 chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
Riza's emotions were so beautifully written and her relationship with Roy is nice to read. I especially love the first sentence you had written,

"A desired return with a heavy heart

Pain and sufferings embedded deep

Peace sought for the turmoil souls

Fault to blame no one but on me."

This describes so much of Riza's self-blame.

Keep on writing! :D