Reviews for Mortal Flesh
Samisim chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
I loved their kiss. It was so them. I loved her inner turmoil.
LoveActuallyFan chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
Wow. Just... Wow.

This was so very beautifully written and so descriptive! I loved the way you wrote their banter, it was so very appropriate and in character! Of course, I squee-ed like a little fan-girl at that perfect kiss! Goodness!

More! Please more! How can Helen resist him? hehe.
chartreuseian chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
Oh heavens... You just really need to continue this right now :P Beautiful and in character. This is everything I'd love for my own writing to be! Wonderful work!
Chapa'ai-hi chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
I loveeeeeeed it! Well done!

Not only was the Teslen in this outstanding, but the way you used Nikola and henry's relationship as a way of getting Nikola to pass on his genius was a brilliant idea!

One more thing... SQUEEEE! XD One of the best kisses written!
Sailor's Wife chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
Wow very sweet! Very descriptive, could almost feel the sensations radiating off the page, or monitor rather.

And sooo very them, captured them perfectly!