|Reviews for Identify Normal|
| Jack24Bauer chapter 11 . 3/5
I enjoyed. Yes, it was definitely very love oriented, but I gotta admit- it's nice seeing a more compassionate version of the beloved Ace Merrill. I also like how you gave him and the Chambers more of a background. It was nice reading your spin on that...
I know this isn't how most stories go, but I'd love to know what happens next. If you have nothing better to do, I'd love to see a sequel.
There is one other thing that I'd like to call attention to really quickly. When you wrote about the part where she finds out that one of the Cobras is named 'Fuzzy' and Eyeball's and Ace's answer; it was uncannily similar to a conversation I had with a friend and my sister. We asked why, and then as a joke said that it was better if one didn't ask. It was so interesting that you followed the same logic...
Finally, please just keep writing. I love your stories and am also a HUGE fan of "Stand Be Me" (1986) and "The Lost Boys'' (1987). I like your stories about them, because you reveal new sides to these great characters, but you keep them loyal enough to the originals so as not to ruin them. It is also a tremendous relief to find well written (in my opinion) stories, that are spelled properly, and have correct grammar. The last two are my biggest pet peeves when it comes to reading some other fanfictions. I'd love to read more from you! Just keep writing...
| Lucia chapter 10 . 2/14
Was this the end? I really hope not. This is an amazing story. I love it!
| a chapter 10 . 10/2/2015
Please kerp going I like this story. I wanns know what happens to sadie
| MugglebornPrincesa chapter 9 . 12/27/2014
it's been a couple of months, are you still continuing with the story? it's pretty good! keep it up! :)
| TheGoofyCat chapter 8 . 8/19/2014
I really like this, hope you continue with it :D
| Mrs. Ace Merrill chapter 8 . 7/14/2014
Goodluck with your friend being deployed. :) Hope all goes well for you.
This chapter was awesome! I really enjoyed it. Please update when you can, glad you're still updating this story. Its amazing, cant wait to see more. Cant wait to see more story, as well as the moment he tells her he loves her for real ; when hes sober :)
Update soon! :)
| vampangel25 chapter 8 . 7/12/2014
please update soon ... cant wait to read more
| DaringxLittlexBelle chapter 7 . 6/23/2014
Awesome! Please update.
| Guest chapter 7 . 6/19/2014
Nice work, I'm vary draw to this story. Once I started I couldn't stop.. You really know how to keep a girl on edge..
Sad that it ended so soon, can't wait for you next update.
| Mrs. Ace Merrill chapter 7 . 4/3/2014
Okay, your amazing at writing this story. Wow, just wow. Speechless for the millionth time reading this! :) This story is great and I can't wait to see the update, I love how she and Ace/John keep flirting together and Ace actually stands up for her; you have him in character very well too! :) I love this soo much, I can't wait to find out what happens next! :)
| Mrs. Ace Merrill chapter 6 . 4/3/2014
Oh my gosh, I love this story sooo much!:)
| BeautifulResurrection chapter 6 . 3/9/2014
Please update :(
| Erudessa-gabrielle chapter 6 . 3/2/2014
| FeliciaFelicis chapter 6 . 1/25/2014
Is it weird that I was thinking about this story earlier... and now you've updated it?
I loved this chapter, and the fact that she has returned. Especially their reactions.
I'm looking forward to the next update.
I hope it soon.
| happypills chapter 5 . 11/3/2013
good story :)
cant wait for da rest!