Reviews for High School and Aliens
Nihatclodra chapter 20 . 10/20
... The Norsorians are Sekirei, aren't they?
Nihatclodra chapter 11 . 10/19
... Wait, so the cat ears are PERMANENT permanent, or is there some method of eventually removing them? 'cause if they are completely permanent, that's far beyond any mere "prank". Pranks are not meant to have permanent effects.
Guest chapter 20 . 10/17
Was not expecting SAO characters to get in. I'm impressed. Looking forward to the next chapter
Robthekiwi121 chapter 2 . 9/14
Seemed cool at first, but immortal Naruto just feels weird to read... the idea is cool though
fenixrojo36 chapter 20 . 7/13
Que pasa viejo quiero que continúes con esta historia está excelente no la abandones continuala
fernando chapter 1 . 7/5
continue please
Guest chapter 20 . 6/19
Sigue con la publicación de esta historia está excelente yo te sigo apoyando no hagas esperar actualizala cada mes o quincena no abandones esta historia continuala
The light Hunter chapter 15 . 6/15
I'm done with this , the plot died when you randomly put other world in it. And the idea of Alternate Naruto is realy stupid. I'm sorry for my words but i can't continue to read this story.
ZRAIARZ chapter 13 . 6/10
There were a noticeable amount of spelling and grammar errors and typos this chapter. It made it difficult to know what was said at times
ZRAIARZ chapter 12 . 6/9
But both foxes and cats purr...
ZRAIARZ chapter 10 . 6/9
wtf... You added Type Moon like a chapter ago which was fine and all cuz i thought you would do more with that but you didnt and then in this chapter not only was their Type Moon all over it but then you add the alternate universe schtick out of nowhere which destroyed the flow and made no sense. There are other ways to introduce Naruto's from other stories that translate better
ZRAIARZ chapter 6 . 6/6
Seems with how long Naruto has been around he would ask more about Lala with how he knows nothing about her. Like her lifespan
ZRAIARZ chapter 2 . 6/5
Are the other sisters going to live with Naruto?
Black Flame of Destruction chapter 3 . 5/27
I noticed in this chapter and a little in the last that you tend to repeat lines at certain points like when Naruto went into his mindscape to talk to Kurama and you repeated that he walked through the forest to a waterfall were a much smaller Kurama lay on a rock below it. Or near the end here where you had Rin say something then she said it again but telling what she did after Naruto nearly grazed her cheek. These are things you need to check for in your writer program before uploading to FF and after during the editing process. Otherwise I like this story so far and cant wait to see Naruto get back to full power and actually fall for Lala. Also i dont think they ever give you a real indepth look at the devilukian race in To Love Ru as far as their biology and life expectancy goes other then they all have tails, can fire energy from said tails, and have super-human physical abilities most prevalent being strength. So are you planning to make then able to virtually live forever or just going to give them a life expectancy of Centuries?
Black Flame of Destruction chapter 1 . 5/25
You know at his full adult height Naruto is actually 180Cm which comes out to 70 inches which is 5'10?
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